*~kuch uski yaadoin main~***

by Badal85 on May 17, 2010, 05:52:01 PM

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jitna ussey dur jaaney ki koshish ki
utney hi kareeb jaa chukey hum...

kabhi uski yaadoin mein ghum-ta-raha
toa kabhi uski battoin ko yaad kerta raha

us bewafaa ko kya gum joa kabhi humin samaj hi nahi saka
kassor toa is dil ka hain..joa kabhi tumhe samaj hi nahi saka...

bas kuch is had tak chahha hain..yun hi ussey bhool nahi saka...
aab toa lagta hain ki apni jaan dekey hi bhoola payengey ussey.


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Re: *~kuch uski yaadoin main~***

«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2010, 05:59:32 PM »

khoya hu tujme manoj kuch is had tak
jinda bhi hu ke nahi kuch paata nahi


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Re: *~kuch uski yaadoin main~***

«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2010, 06:03:02 PM »

apni kismat per manoj kabhi hum ro na sake
jise chaha dil se uske kabhi hum ho na sake


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Re: *~kuch uski yaadoin main~***

«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2010, 09:54:55 PM »

Welcome to Yoindia Badal ji... bahut achcha likha hai apne...!!!


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Re: *~kuch uski yaadoin main~***

«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2010, 11:11:06 PM »

Bahut khoob Badal ji,dil ko chu gayi aapke poem.great creation,beautiful lines by Manoj ji Hats off to you!


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Re: *~kuch uski yaadoin main~***

«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2010, 11:31:47 PM »

Quote from: Badal85 on May 17, 2010, 05:52:01 PM

Gud 1 Badal ....
Keep writng!!!!!!!!!


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Re: *~kuch uski yaadoin main~***

«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2010, 03:36:36 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 17, 2010, 11:11:06 PM

Bahut khoob Badal ji,dil ko chu gayi aapke poem.great creation,beautiful lines by Manoj ji Hats off to you!

padkar her ek sher tera,zakham dil ka mera,ubharkar aata hai
sach kahu gar manoj tera her sher mere dil ko chukar jaata hai


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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2010, 04:38:51 PM »

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on May 18, 2010, 03:36:36 AM

padkar her ek sher tera,zakham dil ka mera,ubharkar aata hai
sach kahu gar manoj tera her sher mere dil ko chukar jaata hai

dil se nikla sher agar dil ko chu nahi paata toa woa sher hi kya
dil ka woa zakham eak sher sey bhikhar paayey toa woa dil kis kaam ka
aapka woa pyar agar eak zalak main kho jaayey toa yea sher kis kaam ka


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Re: *~kuch uski yaadoin main~***

«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2010, 04:42:00 PM »

i just wanna say thank u to all of u for replying to my post and keeping me motivated to write... especially manoj and kaiskar...plz guys let me know if u think that i can improve on some lines as im not pro at this!! i just write what i feel like.

Thank you all very much for all ur appreciation...