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«Reply #60 on: July 24, 2005, 08:06:53 AM » |
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Nice............................................. ......................:D
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«Reply #61 on: July 30, 2005, 05:53:44 PM » |
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Sukhriya keh bhi na sake us ko
ke pehle hi woh chala gaya duur
Sharminda hai aaj bhi us waqt se
jab woh hua tha humari Mohabbat me choor
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«Reply #62 on: August 03, 2005, 04:31:21 AM » |
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Iss se pehle ke bewafaa hojayein...
Kyun na ae dost hum juda hojayein...
Tu bhi heere se ban gaya paththar...
Hum bhi jaane kiya hojayein...
Hum agar manzilein na bann paayein...
Manzilon tak ka raasta hojayein...
Der se soch mein hain parwaane...
Raakh hojayein ya hawa hojayein...
Ab ke gar tu mile to hum tujh se...
AisE liptein ke hum ek hojayein...
Bandagi hum ne chod di faraaz...
Kya karein jab log khuda hojayein...!!
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«Reply #63 on: August 03, 2005, 04:04:38 PM » |
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Hmmmm Nice Selection................  Kya khabar kal ko kya ho jaaye Humsafar raah me juda ho jaaye Aaj aayi hai baharein is dil me Kisi ko pata na chale aur khiza ho jaaye |
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«Reply #64 on: August 07, 2005, 10:57:20 PM » |
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Thank You Saba
ItNi Bhi Kia NaRazGi AiSe Ho KYuN KhaFa
Kho GaYa Hai DeKho Na SaRa QaRaaR MeRa
MudDaToN Ke BaaD TuMhaRa KhuWaaB AaYa Hai
Yeh ShaB Na DhaLNe PaYe AaYe Na SaVeRa
ShaaM Ke SaYe TeRe BiNa KitNe TanHa HoTe HaiN
MuJh Ko SaMet LeTa Hai TeRi YaaDoN Ka AnDheRa
TeRi TaLaaSh MaiN BaTa MaiN KaHaaN JaaooN
Tu KaHaaN Hai AuR Hai KauN Sa DeSh TeRa.......................
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«Reply #65 on: August 09, 2005, 05:56:04 PM » |
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Ohh so sweet
Qarar mera tum ne loot liya
Aur khud beqarar phirte ho
Zara hume bhi khabar ho
Tum hum se kitna pyar karte ho
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«Reply #66 on: August 13, 2005, 06:46:55 PM » |
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Lab si liye hai hum ne na aah koi aayi
Yeh kaisi mohabbat hai yeh kaisi bewafayi
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«Reply #67 on: November 24, 2005, 05:29:09 PM » |
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Saari duniya ki nigaaho.n ka bharam tod diya
Teri tasveer banate hi qalam tod diya
Chaandni jaisa sanam aur qamar sa chehra
Dekh kar tujh ko ujale ne bhi dam tod diya
Haal kuchh aisa hua tujh se bichar kar dil ka
Jaise machhli ne bina paani ke dam tod diya
Yeh mere ishq ki meraaj nahi to aur kya hai
Faisla likhte hi munsif ne qalam tod diya
Un ki nafrat na sahi jaaye gi hum se SABA
Dil ki majboor tamannao ne dam tod diya
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«Reply #68 on: December 11, 2005, 08:46:16 PM » |
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Bewafayi kya hai dosto.n
Bas ek dard ka darya hai dosto.n
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«Reply #69 on: December 17, 2005, 05:48:19 AM » |
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Iss se pehle ke bewafaa hojayein...
Kyun na ae dost hum juda hojayein...
Tu bhi heere se ban gaya paththar...
Hum bhi jaane kiya hojayein...
Hum agar manzilein na bann paayein...
Manzilon tak ka raasta hojayein...
Der se soch mein hain parwaane...
Raakh hojayein ya hawa hojayein...
Ab ke gar tu mile to hum tujh se...
AisE liptein ke hum ek hojayein...
Bandagi hum ne chod di faraaz...
Kya karein jab log khuda hojayein...!! Faree ji bahoot hi llajwaab Gazal ka matla aour makta dono hi bahoot khoob hain...our Gazal ka har ashar achha raha...lekin Faree ji...Is leher main ek ashar ek dam ulat raha...last but one...." ab ke gar tu mile......hum ek ho jaaayein"..Ek taraf aap sarcasti remarks par dhayaan de rahein dujhe taraf..aap ek hone ki baat kar rahein hain...isi ek ashar ne Gazal ko pheeka kiya hai....anayatha...ye aapki Gazal awaal number lene waali hai...bahoot khoob.... |
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«Reply #70 on: December 17, 2005, 11:05:27 AM » |
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Bewafayi ka ajab nazara hai
Har ek kahi na dosh humara hai
Raakh kar ke meri duniya logo.n
Woh kehta hai sanam humara hai
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«Reply #71 on: December 17, 2005, 03:02:13 PM » |
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Tanha Rehne do meri tanhaayee yahi to ek sahara hai,
Soye hue mere Ishq ko jaane kisne pukaara hai.
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«Reply #72 on: December 18, 2005, 10:13:29 AM » |
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Pukaarne wala koi apna hoga ~Harash~
warna is duniya me kaun humara hai
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«Reply #73 on: December 18, 2005, 04:01:55 PM » |
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Saba ji ab kya kahein..na hi poochho toh achha hai....
Apno se ab talak jo paya woh hamne Gazlon main dhala hai,
khud hi andaza kare kis simt andhera our kis simt ujala hai.
meri ik-ik ashar ki dhun jo taar se nikli woh sabne suni hai,
Zamana kya jane jo saaz pe Guzri hai kis dil pe hua chhala hai.
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«Reply #74 on: December 22, 2005, 06:00:46 AM » |
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Maine kiya hai mehsoos tere dil ke dard ko
Lafzo me jo dhala hai us jaan lewa qarb ko
Mit.ti nahi hai zehan se mere woh ajeeb sham
Jab dil me utara tha gazal ke harf ko
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