KYAA DOSTII NIBHAAO GEY HUM SE

by surindarn on September 05, 2014, 02:32:10 PM
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kyaa waedah hai nibhaao gey dostii hum se...
rehne bhi do kahin dil naa lag jaaye hum se!

Pichlee yaadon sahaare hee din kat rahe hain...
maazee kaa khazaanaa naa chin jaaye hum se!

gar chalet rahe to pahunch jaayen gey ik din...
chaahe kitnii bhi door ho zindgii hum se!

nahin maaloom aap kyun roothe theh hum se...
kaun sii kaisee khataa ho gayee thii hum se!

geron se ulfaat bhrhaa lee thii tumh ne...
sarkar kis liye kee thii berukhee hum se!

humen to aadat hai bahut kam bolne kee...
kyaa kabhi koi shikaayat huee thii hum se!

aapko bhulaa den iss liye shayar bane theh...
yeh sakoon phir naa kahin chin jaaye hum se!!

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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2014, 03:11:14 PM »
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wah wah bohut khub bohut umda grt job
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Feeling is awesome and perfection is superb still I felt something needs to be modified or you might say something to b edited ..

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Quote from: surindarn on September 05, 2014, 02:32:10 PM
kyaa waedah hai nibhaao gey dostii hum se...
rehne bhi do kahin dil naa lag jaaye hum se!

Pichlee yaadon sahaare hee din kat rahe hain...
maazee kaa khazaanaa naa chin jaaye hum se!

gar chalet rahe to pahunch jaayen gey ik din...
chaahe kitnii bhi door ho zindgii hum se!

nahin maaloom aap kyun roothe theh hum se...
kaun sii kaisee khataa ho gayee thii hum se!

geron se ulfaat bhrhaa lee thii tumh ne...
sarkar kis liye kee thii berukhee hum se!

humen to aadat hai bahut kam bolne kee...
kyaa kabhi koi shikaayat huee thii hum se!

aapko bhulaa den iss liye shayar bane theh...
yeh sakoon phir naa kahin chin jaaye hum se!!

Surindar.N                  "MohanN"



 


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