laut kar fir wo jamane na aaye

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 27, 2008, 09:30:00 AM
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bichde wo yu ki dobara milne na aaye
laut kar wo fir gujre jamane na aaye

gaya tha geet kabhi meine cheda tha unhone tarana
par aaj wo mere geeton ko gungunane na aaye

shikwa nahi shikayat nahi jo wo paas nahi
bas ranz is baat ka hai ki ek baar b wo hamein bulane na aaye

bhul jata gar wo mujhe to koi gam na tha
dil mei basakar b hamein wo dil se lagane na aaye

hua khat-o-jariya b khatm ab likhne ka
par wo khwab mei b hamein manane na aaye
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2008, 03:12:03 PM »
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bichde wo yu ki dobara milne na aaye
laut kar wo fir gujre jamane na aaye

gaya tha geet kabhi meine cheda tha unhone tarana
par aaj wo mere geeton ko gungunane na aaye

shikwa nahi shikayat nahi jo wo paas nahi
bas ranz is baat ka hai ki ek baar b wo hamein bulane na aaye

bhul jata gar wo mujhe to koi gam na tha
dil mei basakar b hamein wo dil se lagane na aaye

hua khat-o-jariya b khatm ab likhne ka
par wo khwab mei b hamein manane na aaye

Bhawna jee aapne bahut accha gazal share kiya hai. Thanks for sharing.
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2008, 05:20:48 AM »
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sonia ji shayri padhne aur use sarahne k liye shukriya
sonia ji ye creation b mera hi hey hamein ye to nahi pata ki aapko ye kyu mehsus ho raha hey ki hamne ki hamne ye shayri nahi likhi par haqikat to yahi hey ki ye creation b hamari hi hey
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2008, 05:59:05 AM »
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Very Nice One... Kaushikbhawna   Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2008, 06:08:22 AM »
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shukriya mahiya ji

dard dil ka itna badha ki ek aah b na nikli
dil roya itna ki aankh se ek bund b na nikli
wo to chale gaye kehkar maaf kar dena "bhawna"
aur mere munh se unke khilaf aaj tak ek baat b na nikli
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