"Leyla-Majnu"

by Sayyid Randeri on March 10, 2008, 08:29:57 PM
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2008, 08:32:29 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Sayyid.. bahoot khoob...
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2008, 08:34:20 PM »
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Bohot khoob Sayyid...har ek sher dil chu lene wala hai...dard se bhara...!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2008, 08:38:30 PM »
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Himmat afzay ka sukriya pooja ji aap ne hamesha hosla bdhaya he

talat ji meherbani aapki.
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2008, 03:48:36 AM »
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bahut khoob Sayyid Randeri  sahab.....aapkee Kavish hameiN behad pasand aayee

nazm ko aapne acha sareeka roop diya hai...........

Dushman bane ab chah ko bhulaye,
be-wafaoN maiN ab tum khoob aaye.

Koi na ab aake deep  yahaN jalaye,
Meri aarzoo ke doobe haiN saaye.

MaiN khayaal-e-Gum se choor hooN,
Mera dard-e-dil ab na chhoot jaye.

YuiN ban ke ye rounaq GairoN ki,
koi na nafrat ab is tarah sataye.


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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2008, 01:08:23 PM »
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Bohot khoob Harash !!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2008, 05:50:46 PM »
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Quote from: harashmahajan on March 11, 2008, 03:48:36 AM
bahut khoob Sayyid Randeri  sahab.....aapkee Kavish hameiN behad pasand aayee

nazm ko aapne acha sareeka roop diya hai...........

Dushman bane ab chah ko bhulaye,
be-wafaoN maiN ab tum khoob aaye.

Koi na ab aake deep  yahaN jalaye,
Meri aarzoo ke doobe haiN saaye.

MaiN khayaal-e-Gum se choor hooN,
Mera dard-e-dil ab na chhoot jaye.

YuiN ban ke ye rounaq GairoN ki,
koi na nafrat ab is tarah sataye.


Harash

Harash ji zarra-nwazi ka shukriya!
Aap ki inayat he Aap ne jo is tifle-maktab ko sraha,
or YO ko ek bar phir apne klam se nwaza,Aap ke andaz ka kya kehna.

Apni aek gazal ke chnd ash'ar moqe ki nisbat se pesh kar ta hun shayad kisi qabil ho.:-

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«Reply #7 on: March 11, 2008, 06:38:18 PM »
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Bohot khoob Sayyid !!
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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2008, 08:04:03 PM »
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Thanx and Bohot khoob Sayyid ji !!
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«Reply #9 on: March 11, 2008, 08:29:23 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SAYYID JI!!!!BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI Applause
BAHUT KHOOB HARASHJI.,AAPNE BHI KAMAAL LKA LIKHA HAI!! Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 11, 2008, 10:08:06 PM »
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Quote from: harashmahajan on March 11, 2008, 08:04:03 PM
Thanx and Bohot khoob Sayyid ji !!

Skukriya harash ji!
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Quote from: khwaish on March 11, 2008, 08:29:23 PM
BAHUT KHOOB SAYYID JI!!!!BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI Applause
BAHUT KHOOB HARASHJI.,AAPNE BHI KAMAAL LKA LIKHA HAI!! Applause

khwaish ji nwazis he aapki
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«Reply #12 on: March 11, 2008, 10:24:24 PM »
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Quote from: Talat on March 11, 2008, 06:38:18 PM
Bohot khoob Sayyid !!

shukriya Talat ji aap ne hamesha hosla bhdhaya he,
Jzakallah!!!
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