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aaj dusro ka waasta dekar phir rulaya unhone humein..
noor e khuda ka rasta dekar phir bhulaya unhone humein..
aisa lagta hai roshni mein kuch kami fir se hai..
aaj tanhaayi ko raabta lekar phir sataya unhone humein..
yeh mana ki hum dil unko dekar ke baithe hain..
hamare dil ko todhkar magar phir dikhaya unhone humein..
kaisi yeh raahein hain ishq ki kabhi aankhon ko khali hone nahi deti..
yeh dekho ki khwaab jannat ka dikha kar ke jehannum ghumaya unhone humein..
main kal bhi unse pyar karti thi aur aaj bhi unse meri saansein hain..
chadha kar sooli pe pyar se bahut der tak jhulaya unhone humein..
aaj seene mein chubhte hain mere bedard se aansu..
dekar ke zakhm humko phir khanzar se sehlaya unhone humein..
kaise hum zindagi mein mithaas apni dalte kaho..
har baar meetha bol kar zehar pilaya unhone humein..
mera gunaah yeh tha ki mohabbat seekhi unse thi..
izhaar karke mohabbat ka khel bataya unhone humein..
aaj zaruratein khatm ho gayi lagta hai unki humse..
karke bahanaa waqt ka rastaa bahar ka dikhaya unhone humein...
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2012, 07:05:23 PM » |
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very nice jeet....  |
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lovely_charan
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2012, 07:07:07 PM » |
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thank you bhaiya..
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2012, 07:08:41 PM » |
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welcome jeet ek rau kabool karo...dil se diya hai... |
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2012, 07:14:33 PM » |
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thank you bhaiya.. magar bhaiya i dont know yeh rau kya hota hai seriously..  please tell me.. is it a gud thing?? |
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2012, 07:16:03 PM » |
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thank you bhaiya.. magar bhaiya i dont know yeh rau kya hota hai seriously.. please tell me.. is it a gud thing?? jeet mujhe bhi kuch jada nahi maloom, shayad ye tareef ke roop mein diya jata hai, aap ki shayari ki saharna ke roop mein....like hai shayad.... |
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2012, 07:18:35 PM » |
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oh great then i m really thankful to you bhaiya.. i thought its something like warning.. hehehe.. i was worried when it increased.. but i was too shy to ask anyone.. thats y i asked you.. thank you very very much.. how can i give one to you? |
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«Reply #7 on: December 01, 2012, 07:22:43 PM » |
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oh great then i m really thankful to you bhaiya.. i thought its something like warning.. hehehe.. i was worried when it increased.. but i was too shy to ask anyone.. thats y i asked you.. thank you very very much.. how can i give one to you? dear you just dont have to give me because i gave you one, aap ko jab accha lage tab dijiye ga... waise aap ki information ke liye rau ke niche ek + ka maark hota hai, usko click kerne se ek rau diya jata hai |
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«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2012, 07:25:22 PM » |
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oh acha bhaiya... and please tell me kya yahan bhi rau pe limits hain?? i mean how many rau one can give in a day .. to praise some work?? |
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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2012, 07:27:55 PM » |
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oh acha bhaiya... and please tell me kya yahan bhi rau pe limits hain?? i mean how many rau one can give in a day .. to praise some work?? jeet yaha shayad 8hours mein ek hi de sakta hain..because i just tried to give some one a rau and it said to wait for 8 hours.... |
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«Reply #10 on: December 01, 2012, 07:30:00 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2012, 07:31:33 PM » |
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thank you so much jeet, i will cherish it as it is from heart... thank you |
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«Reply #12 on: December 01, 2012, 07:33:47 PM » |
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zindagi se rahi ham ko shikayat kayi, ke zindagi rahi jine laayak nahi, lekin jab koi aap jaisa farishta aaya zindagi mein, toh zindagi ne payi saansein nayi.... |
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«Reply #13 on: December 01, 2012, 07:35:36 PM » |
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your welcome bhaiya.. now its too late.. m gonna sleep in next 10-15 mins.. so good night tc bhaiya.. please whenever you post something send me the link i dnt know this site too much na.. |
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«Reply #14 on: December 01, 2012, 07:37:32 PM » |
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your welcome bhaiya.. now its too late.. m gonna sleep in next 10-15 mins.. so good night tc bhaiya.. please whenever you post something send me the link i dnt know this site too much na.. ok jeet....also here we cannot post more than one or two shayari per day of our own, but can post jokes or liked shayari's as many as we wish....just now i have posted one of my latest "sila mila" |
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on eTI community..
