Mai khaak hoon abb

by Alam Qazi on November 19, 2008, 12:21:51 PM

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Alam Qazi

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Jo Kaam Kiya Na Kabhi, Wo Karne Lagaa Hoo'n Abb
Labo'n Par Sholo'n Ko, Rakhne Lagaa Hoo'n Abb

Armaan Ki Sej Ko Maine, Chitaa Par Litaa Diya
Bashar Hayaat Nahi, Mai Khaak Hoo'n Abb...

___________Alam


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2008, 02:17:29 PM »

Bohat khoob Qazi saheb

Tumse bichad ke jo fursat mili hame
Khud se bhi main milne laga hu abb

-sg-


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Pooja

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2008, 06:49:41 PM »

NICE WORK Alam Qazi AND SG

SG apki likhi do line ke sath do line aor mila rahi hu:

Tumse bichad ke jo fursat mili hame
Khud se bhi main milne laga hu abb
her pal rahta tha jikar sirf tera lubo per
khud ko aaine main niharne laga hu abb


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2008, 07:00:13 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on November 19, 2008, 06:49:41 PM

Niharna hain jo khud ko meri nazar se nihar
Mera dawa hain tujse haseen is qaynaat me koi nahi hoga
Yu to kaiee baar khud se mutmaeen na hua hoga tu
Mera dawa hain meri soch me tujme koi aib nahi hoga

-SG-


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Pooja

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2008, 07:04:26 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... magar Bewafai section ka takaza hai ki bewafai per likhe Usual Smile

Soch main he rahe aor yah dhoka kha gaye
khaak hue sapne, her khushi per baadal cha gaye


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2008, 07:08:04 PM »

...good one Alam...nice one Sajid and Pooja...


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Pooja

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2008, 07:08:38 PM »

shukaria JHL ji ... magar apki lines kaha gai.. do line to app aise he likh dete hai jante hai hum


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2008, 07:15:06 PM »

...soch soch mein raat guzar gayi,
baato baato mein mulaqat guzar gayi,
haqeeqat ki aas mein bichhad gaye kuchh apne,
bas kuchh is tarah mere khaakh hue sapne...


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2008, 07:17:19 PM »

achcha khasa mood tha puri lay tut gayee ab shayri likhne se pehle puri research karni padegi section kya hain kaisa hain q hain waigerah waigerah.............good night guys


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Pooja

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2008, 07:19:05 PM »

WAH YAH HUI NA BAAT JHL ji... bahoot khoob... char line mai kar gaye app kamal!!

Sapne mere ho rahe the khak, phir bhi muskurate rahe
soch ashayad badal jao tum, zindagi chalate rahe
chor gaye jab tum he to kaya karte hum
khud pe ro ke, dunia ko hum hansate rahe


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dead heart

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2008, 07:24:20 PM »

meri nazar se woh niharne ke layak nahin hai,
uske jaise bewaffaon ke liye mere dil main pyar nahin hai,
woh keti phire sabse ke hai uska dil khoobsoorat,
par sachai toh yeh hai ke uske jaise dilon ke liye iss duniya main koi jagah nahin hai....


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2008, 07:25:32 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 19, 2008, 07:17:19 PM

achcha khasa mood tha puri lay tut gayee ab shayri likhne se pehle puri research karni padegi section kya hain kaisa hain q hain waigerah waigerah.............good night guys

...agar meri wajah kuchh bura laga hai to sorry sajid...


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Pooja

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #12 on: November 19, 2008, 07:27:06 PM »

wow good one DH!!

Toote dil se bhi bad-dua di nahi jaati
pyaar apne ko he takleef di nahi jaati
maaf kar diya kyun uske her ek dhoke ko Pooja ne
yah baat khud ko aor dunia ko bhi samjhai nahi jaati


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #13 on: November 19, 2008, 07:30:36 PM »

...good one Pooja and DH...


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dead heart

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Re: Mai khaak hoon abb

«Reply #14 on: November 19, 2008, 07:36:55 PM »

dard hai seene main yeh jataya nahin jaata,
mere dil ki maut ka tarana mujse gaya nahin jaata,
ab kaise zabit karun logon ko ke woh bewaffa thi,
kyun ki uska choda hua zakhm mujse dikhaya nahin jata...