Mai khaak hoon abb

by Alam Qazi on November 19, 2008, 12:21:51 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 19, 2008, 07:37:22 PM »
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Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on November 19, 2008, 07:30:36 PM
...good one Pooja and DH...

JANAB DO LINES KAHA GAI APKI Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: November 19, 2008, 07:38:46 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on November 19, 2008, 07:36:55 PM
dard hai seene main yeh jataya nahin jaata,
mere dil ki maut ka tarana mujse gaya nahin jaata,
ab kaise zabit karun logon ko ke woh bewaffa thi,
kyun ki uska choda hua zakhm mujse dikhaya nahin jata...

kah diya jo usko bewafa to main khud bhi bewafa ho gaya
na seh sakuga khud ki bewafai, baat such hai, uski bewafai ko seh gaya
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«Reply #17 on: November 19, 2008, 07:53:03 PM »
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ager ki kisi maine bewaffai toh main zinda nahin reh paunga,
todke kisi aur ka dil main khud ka kaise jod paunga...
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«Reply #18 on: November 19, 2008, 07:57:58 PM »
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kaya toot kar bikhra aor kaya simta rah gaya
uske chale jaane ke baad, yah sawal, sawal ban kar rah gaya
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«Reply #19 on: November 19, 2008, 08:03:35 PM »
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har sawal ka jawab nahin hota,
pee kar kisi ko bhi hosh nahin rehta,
logon ko apne dard bat the main thakgaya hoon,
har koi khuda ki tarha sun ne wala nahin hota...
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«Reply #20 on: November 19, 2008, 08:07:55 PM »
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bahoot sahi kaha DH!!

jawab na mile kahin koi raah to mile
pee kar aa jaayega hosh, aise chah to mile
khuda na mile to koi gum nahi mujhe
bas uska kahin se koi surag to mile
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«Reply #21 on: November 20, 2008, 08:01:48 PM »
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uska surag dhunda maine sagar ki gherai main, mujhe nahin mila,
uska surag dhunda maine paigambaron ki likhai main, mujhe nahin mila,
arey jo basta hai har ek dil main uska surag kya dhund raha hoon main,
isiliye gaya hoon main aaj kabrastan apne dil ki kabar pe kyun ke uss bewaffa se mujhe to apna dil hi mara hua mila...
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«Reply #22 on: November 22, 2008, 12:49:07 AM »
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...good job DH and Pooja...achhi mehfil jamayi...
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: November 22, 2008, 04:10:30 AM »
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Thanks JHL JI
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«Reply #24 on: November 22, 2008, 09:13:16 PM »
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Saza hum apne naam karke use maaf kar jaayenge.
Par mohabbat aur bewafaai ke bich ka matlab saaf kar jaayenge...
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«Reply #25 on: November 22, 2008, 11:13:20 PM »
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bewaffai ka matlab hum duniya walon ko sikha jayenge,
aur vaada raha sache pyar karne walon se ke in bewaffaon ko pyar ehsaas dila jayenge...
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«Reply #26 on: November 22, 2008, 11:24:14 PM »
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...ehsaas aaj kisiko nahi hai sachche pyaar ka,
duniya ki baato mein aake chale hai qatl karne apne yaar ka...
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Alam Qazi
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«Reply #27 on: November 23, 2008, 04:52:32 AM »
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good one !!! nice line.
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: November 24, 2008, 04:31:51 AM »
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nice work DH and JHL JI
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«Reply #29 on: November 24, 2008, 05:05:16 AM »
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boht khoob pooja ji,dead heart ji and JHL ji.
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