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«Reply #30 on: April 25, 2010, 08:34:15 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 03:12:57 PM
Thanx a lot Rahim Ji
I think u feel it ......wid d same feeling i wrote it ....
its vry deep ..... ppl change a lot ....... hai na ?

Halat badal jate hai, zindagi badal jati hai, nazariya badal jata hai...insaan nahin badalte...
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«Reply #31 on: April 25, 2010, 08:35:04 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 03:22:41 PM
Wah!!!!!!!!! kya baat hai !!!!!!RAhim ji "Kamal "

Yeh barish main beegna bhut acha lagta hai aaj kaal
Pani ankh se aah reha hai ya asmaan se yeh pata hi nahi chalta
Apne gum main ro lene ka bahana bi mil jata hai
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BArsaat kaha kaha ho rehi hai dekhne valo ko  yeh andaza b nhi hota
Shukriya aur bahaut khoob!
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«Reply #32 on: April 25, 2010, 08:37:10 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 03:36:38 PM
Chahat to chahat hoti hai, yeh kabhi kum ho nhi sakti
Mohbat hamesha Jawan rehti hai yeh kabhi mar nahi sakti
Chaha hota kisi ko to paane ki himat bi rekhte
Mohbat voh aag hai ho kabhi tham nahi sakti ..

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«Reply #33 on: April 25, 2010, 08:54:42 PM »
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Thnx Rahim
Quote from: -Rahim- on April 25, 2010, 08:35:04 PM
Shukriya aur bahaut khoob!
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«Reply #34 on: April 25, 2010, 10:55:23 PM »
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bahut khoob Neel ji.... bahut sundar likha hai apne....!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 03:22:41 PM
Wah!!!!!!!!! kya baat hai !!!!!!RAhim ji "Kamal "

Yeh barish main beegna bhut acha lagta hai aaj kaal
Pani ankh se aah reha hai ya asmaan se yeh pata hi nahi chalta
Apne gum main ro lene ka bahana bi mil jata hai
aur
BArsaat kaha kaha ho rehi hai dekhne valo ko  yeh andaza b nhi hota
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«Reply #35 on: April 25, 2010, 10:56:38 PM »
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Lajawab Neel ji...!!!

teri judaai k aag me yun jal rahe hain hum,
na to jee paate hain na to mar pate hain hum,
tu zaraa aake humpe mohabbat ki baarish kar de,
teri raahon pe aankhen bichhaye baithe hain hum...

Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 03:36:38 PM
Chahat to chahat hoti hai, yeh kabhi kum ho nhi sakti
Mohbat hamesha Jawan rehti hai yeh kabhi mar nahi sakti
Chaha hota kisi ko to paane ki himat bi rekhte
Mohbat voh aag hai ho kabhi tham nahi sakti ..
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«Reply #36 on: April 29, 2010, 11:46:29 AM »
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salam aap ki nazam parhi aur bahut achie lagi....bas asay hi likhtay rehna...
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«Reply #37 on: April 29, 2010, 12:15:45 PM »
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Aankhein tou band nahi thi hamaari
Nazro ka noor bhi sahi tha hamaara
Kya Mr.India bankar aaye they tum
Ya yuu he behka rahe ho humko tum

Quote from: klaskar on April 24, 2010, 08:15:06 PM
beautiful...

subah ki suraj k saath main aaya tha,
raat ko chaand k saath main aaya tha,
tune dekh k bhi andekha kar diya mujhe,
teri har dhadkan k saath main aaya tha...
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«Reply #38 on: April 29, 2010, 12:31:03 PM »
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Chahat Sakhee inki bhee kam nahi thee
Khata inki mohbat Shama se kar baithe
Patange ki tarah jal k jaan gawa baithe
Himmat he karke lipte they jalti lou se

Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 03:36:38 PM
Chahat to chahat hoti hai, yeh kabhi kum ho nhi sakti
Mohbat hamesha Jawan rehti hai yeh kabhi mar nahi sakti
Chaha hota kisi ko to paane ki himat bi rekhte
Mohbat voh aag hai ho kabhi tham nahi sakti ..
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«Reply #39 on: April 29, 2010, 12:35:58 PM »
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Salaam... bahut bahut shukriya hamari nazam ko apna waqt dene aur use pasand karne ke liye...!!!

Quote from: sabah arzoo on April 29, 2010, 11:46:29 AM
salam aap ki nazam parhi aur bahut achie lagi....bas asay hi likhtay rehna...
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«Reply #40 on: April 29, 2010, 12:37:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya @kaash ji....!!!

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waah bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kalaskar ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley behatreen rachna  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #41 on: April 29, 2010, 12:38:31 PM »
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bahut achche.... hum to hain hi Mr. India.... Usual Smile

Mr. India ko Mr. India banne ki jarurat nahi hoti,
yun behke huye ko behkaane ki jarurat nahi hoti,
aap apni meethi chhuri se ghayal karte ho humein,
shukar hai uspe malham lagaane ki jarurat nahi hoti....

Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 29, 2010, 12:15:45 PM
Aankhein tou band nahi thi hamaari
Nazro ka noor bhi sahi tha hamaara
Kya Mr.India bankar aaye they tum
Ya yuu he behka rahe ho humko tum

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«Reply #42 on: April 29, 2010, 01:27:51 PM »
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Chalo aapko Pasand ya samajh nahi aaya tou Mr. India ki jagah...
Likh dete hain...
"Kya BHOOT ban kar aaye they tum"


Quote from: klaskar on April 29, 2010, 12:38:31 PM
bahut achche.... hum to hain hi Mr. India.... Usual Smile

Mr. India ko Mr. India banne ki jarurat nahi hoti,
yun behke huye ko behkaane ki jarurat nahi hoti,
aap apni meethi chhuri se ghayal karte ho humein,
shukar hai uspe malham lagaane ki jarurat nahi hoti....
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«Reply #43 on: April 29, 2010, 01:50:16 PM »
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Are aap to bura maan gaye deviji.... humne kadaapi ye nahi kaha ki humein pasand nahi aaya... humein to bahut pasand aaya tabhi to reply kiya... waise "BHOOT" bhi bura nahi hai... aapko raat me sapno me aake daraya karenge.... q? daroge to nahi na ?  Laughing hard

Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 29, 2010, 01:27:51 PM
Chalo aapko Pasand ya samajh nahi aaya tou Mr. India ki jagah...
Likh dete hain...
"Kya BHOOT ban kar aaye they tum"
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«Reply #44 on: April 29, 2010, 11:46:13 PM »
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Bhut Khoob Koyal Ji .......Kya baat hai aaj kaal Mr. India Preshan to nhi kar reha na .......

Patanga bi Jalne ke liye chala aata hai kyon
ANjaam usse pata hai fir bi jaal jata hai kyon


Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 29, 2010, 12:31:03 PM
Chahat Sakhee inki bhee kam nahi thee
Khata inki mohbat Shama se kar baithe
Patange ki tarah jal k jaan gawa baithe
Himmat he karke lipte they jalti lou se
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