MaiN mar jaaoN to

by Ghulam Haider on October 26, 2008, 10:40:24 AM
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MaiN mar jaaoN to mera gham na khaana.
Meri turbat pe tum rone na aana.

Koi waada hua poora na tum se,
Hamesha kar diya koi bahaana.

Wafaa ki raah tum ko mil na paaii,
Jalaa baitha maiN apna aashiyaana.

Tumhaari har adaa maiN jaanta hoN,
Jalaa kar dil hamesha muskuraana.

Ye hi to aaj tak tum ne kiya hai,
Sataana dil jalaana aazmaana.

Gile shikve karoN tum se maiN kya kya,
UnheN bhi tum bana doge fasaana.

Na toote dil kisi ka tum se haider,
Khuda ko hai kisi din muNh dikhaana.
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2008, 01:47:29 PM »
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Quote from: Ghulam Haider on October 26, 2008, 10:40:24 AM
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MaiN mar jaaoN to mera gham na khaana.
Meri turbat pe tum rone na aana.

Koi waada hua poora na tum se,
Hamesha kar diya koi bahaana.

Wafaa ki raah tum ko mil na paaii,
Jalaa baithe ham apna aashiyaana.

Tumhaari har adaa maiN jaanta hoN,
Jalaa kar dil hamesha muskuraana.

Ye hi to aaj tak tum ne kiya hai,
Sataana dil jalaana aazmaana.

Gile shikve karoN tum se maiN kya kya,
UnheN bhi tum bana doge fasaana.

Na toote dil kisi ka tum se haider,
Khuda ko hai kisi din muNh dikhaana.

Main bhi pesh karu lafzo me chupakar zakhm apne
kisi roz yeh hunar haider humko bhi sikhana.

                                   -sg-
 

You are one of my favorite no doubt about it.
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2008, 01:55:22 PM »
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bas sochte rahe raat bhar kii kaahin humse khata toh na huyi
kii gujri shab jab saath main hum bhi gujar gaye
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2008, 02:04:05 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on October 26, 2008, 01:55:22 PM
bas sochte rahe raat bhar kii kaahin humse khata toh na huyi
kii gujri shab jab saath main hum bhi gujar gaye
Kya baat hai.....bohot dard bhara ehsaas hai....Likhte raho bhai
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2008, 02:25:46 PM »
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bohat badhiya haider ji..... Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2008, 02:30:01 PM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on October 26, 2008, 02:25:46 PM
bohat badhiya haider ji..... Applause Applause
Pasand karne ke liye Thanks...
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2008, 02:32:40 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 26, 2008, 01:47:29 PM
Main bhi pesh karu lafzo me chupakar zakhm apne
kisi roz yeh hunar haider humko bhi sikhana.

                                   -sg-
 

You are one of my favorite no doubt about it.

Kya kete ho saajid bhi..
MaiN to kuchh bhi nahiN hoN. Ye aap ki dili mohabbat hai.bohot bohot shukriya...
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2008, 06:16:35 AM »
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Just wonderful Haider Ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2008, 12:32:16 PM »
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Quote from: Ghulam Haider on October 26, 2008, 10:40:24 AM
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MaiN mar jaaoN to mera gham na khaana.
Meri turbat pe tum rone na aana.

Koi waada hua poora na tum se,
Hamesha kar diya koi bahaana.

Wafaa ki raah tum ko mil na paaii,
Jalaa baitha maiN apna aashiyaana.

Tumhaari har adaa maiN jaanta hoN,
Jalaa kar dil hamesha muskuraana.

Ye hi to aaj tak tum ne kiya hai,
Sataana dil jalaana aazmaana.

Gile shikve karoN tum se maiN kya kya,
UnheN bhi tum bana doge fasaana.

Na toote dil kisi ka tum se haider,
Khuda ko hai kisi din muNh dikhaana.

Bohot Khoob Haider  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nice contribution Sajid Ji, Salil  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2008, 12:33:00 PM »
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I think, the ghazal is more suitable for Dard-e-Bewafai than Khumar-e-Ishq....Moving it there.
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Bahoot Hi Achche Hyder Bhaijaan Nice One,.
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