Malal ab tak hain............(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on November 05, 2008, 06:48:43 AM
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Malal ab tak hain unko door q banayee humne apni mazar
Woh ek roz jo jala gaye the meri kabr pe diya

Sawal ab tak hain unka kayem hame maut q hain aayee
Apne hatho se jinhone mera qatl tha kiya

Dene wale ne dedi tumhe duniya ki tamam khoobsurti
Bas ek khoobsurat sa dil nahi diya

Jinke liye guzari umr wahi poochte hain waqt-e-kaza
Ab to bata de GHAYEL tu jeeya to kiske liye jeeya

                                 -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2008, 08:01:48 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SAJID SAHAB Applause

MOHABBAT KI HAI TUMSE
SHIKAYAT NAHI HAI KOI
KYA GILA KAROON TUMHSE
ZINDAGI TUMHE DI HAI POORI
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izzat bakshne ke liye bohat bohat shukriya
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BAHUT KHOOB SAJID SAHAB Applause
 
MOHABBAT KI HAI TUMSE
SHIKAYAT NAHI HAI KOI
KYA GILA KAROON TUMHSE
ZINDAGI TUMHE DI HAI POORI
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2008, 09:57:52 AM »
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Nice One Sajid Bhai,.
And Kashish Ji,.
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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2008, 09:59:55 AM »
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Mere Naseeb Mein Likhein Hain Gham Khudaa Ne,.
Ye Teri Bewafaai Nahi, Jo Main Udaas Hoon "Jaan",.

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«Reply #5 on: November 05, 2008, 01:34:43 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji

Nice lines Diya, Azeem
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2008, 01:44:14 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 05, 2008, 01:32:34 PM
thanks for appreciating and sharing these beautiful lines
Sajib Saheb, This Line I Have Not Shared Here,.
These Are My Feelings,.
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2008, 01:58:06 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 05, 2008, 06:48:43 AM
Malal ab tak hain unko door q banayee humne apni mazar
Woh ek roz jo jala gaye the meri kabr pe diya

Sawal ab tak hain unka kayem hame maut q hain aayee
Apne hatho se jinhone mera qatl tha kiya

Dene wale ne dedi tumhe duniya ki tamam khoobsurti
Bas ek khoobsurat sa dil nahi diya

Jinke liye guzari umr wahi poochte hain waqt-e-kaza
Ab to bata de GHAYEL tu jeeya to kiske liye jeeya

                                 -Sajid Ghayel-

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Lekin, aapne bataaya ki nahin?? ki aap jeeye toh kiske liye jeeye.. ??



Excellent Reply Diya and Azeem... Thumbs UP Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2008, 02:01:54 PM »
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Shukriya Mahiya Ji,.

Aangarey Lagte Hain Mujhe, Boondein Barish Ke,.
Jo Dil Ko Thandak Pahoonchaate The, Mohabbat Ke Daur Mein,.

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«Reply #9 on: November 06, 2008, 04:52:23 AM »
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Bohat khoob Sajid ji
Nice reply diya
Nice reply Azeem bhai..
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«Reply #10 on: November 07, 2008, 09:07:43 AM »
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Shukriya Didi,.
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«Reply #11 on: November 07, 2008, 09:53:14 AM »
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bohut khoob sajid ji
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thank you freinds
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Bahut acche sajid_ghayal jii
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thank u sonia
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