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soudagar
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uske diye mohabbat ke khaton ko maine jala diya
uske chahat ki yadon ko seene mein hee dafna diya
dard aur ghamon ne chahi dil mein jagah thodi see
pure dil ko hee ghamon ka thikaana banaa diyaa
use dekh dil mein machal jate the hazaroo armaan
har ek armaan ko maine ab gehri neend sula diyaa
dekh uska ek aansuun tadap uthata tha dil yeh meraa
ab na hogaa kuch asar dil ko yun pathar bana diyaa
chhod sath mera gairon ki bahon mein simat rahi thi wo
dekh uski bewafai khule mein sar sharm se jhukaa liyaa
bahut royee uski bewafai dekh mere chahat bhari aakhein
ab in aakhon ko bhi maine sachaii dekhna sikhaa diyaa
yaron ki mehfil mein hokar bhi na hota hai mera dil
is qadar zalim ki bewafai ne mujhko tanha banaa diyaa
mehfil mein sabne aazmaaish kee mujhe hasane kee
yeh kya "soudagar" tumne puri mehfeel ko rulaa diyaa
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2012, 06:39:57 PM » |
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BAHUT KHUB uske diye mohabbat ke khaton ko maine jala diya
uske chahat ki yadon ko seene mein hee dafna diya
dard aur ghamon ne chahi dil mein jagah thodi see
pure dil ko hee ghamon ka thikaana banaa diyaa
use dekh dil mein machal jate the hazaroo armaan
har ek armaan ko maine ab gehri neend sula diyaa
dekh uska ek aansuun tadap uthata tha dil yeh meraa
ab na hogaa kuch asar dil ko yun pathar bana diyaa
chhod sath mera gairon ki bahon mein simat rahi thi wo
dekh uski bewafai khule mein sar sharm se jhukaa liyaa
bahut royee uski bewafai dekh mere chahat bhari aakhein
ab in aakhon ko bhi maine sachaii dekhna sikhaa diyaa
yaron ki mehfil mein hokar bhi na hota hai mera dil
is qadar zalim ki bewafai ne mujhko tanha banaa diyaa
mehfil mein sabne aazmaaish kee mujhe hasane kee
yeh kya "soudagar" tumne puri mehfeel ko rulaa diyaa
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2012, 08:57:55 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2012, 09:02:46 PM » |
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kya baat hai abhi tak mohabbat hi mohabbat bikhri thi Yoindia pe...aur ab sabhi log bewafai aur ruswai pe likh rahe hai...
par kya kamaal likh rahe hai..
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Karan Ji Bahut Khub
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2012, 04:35:27 AM » |
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uske diye mohabbat ke khaton ko maine jala diya
uske chahat ki yadon ko seene mein hee dafna diya
dard aur ghamon ne chahi dil mein jagah thodi see
pure dil ko hee ghamon ka thikaana banaa diyaa
use dekh dil mein machal jate the hazaroo armaan
har ek armaan ko maine ab gehri neend sula diyaa
dekh uska ek aansuun tadap uthata tha dil yeh meraa
ab na hogaa kuch asar dil ko yun pathar bana diyaa
chhod sath mera gairon ki bahon mein simat rahi thi wo
dekh uski bewafai khule mein sar sharm se jhukaa liyaa
bahut royee uski bewafai dekh mere chahat bhari aakhein
ab in aakhon ko bhi maine sachaii dekhna sikhaa diyaa
yaron ki mehfil mein hokar bhi na hota hai mera dil
is qadar zalim ki bewafai ne mujhko tanha banaa diyaa
mehfil mein sabne aazmaaish kee mujhe hasane kee
yeh kya "soudagar" tumne puri mehfeel ko rulaa diyaa
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2012, 05:15:00 AM » |
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Mehfil ko Rulaa diya. Kaha say itnaye barastay bhave ubhar kar aatay ahi bhigay hoae hai, parnay walo ko bhi bhiga jate hai.kalm aur kalam dono ko dad
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bahut khoob saudagarji
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2012, 07:34:04 AM » |
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2012, 02:24:34 AM » |
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Very very nice written soudagar
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on eTI community..
