Mehsoos kar pate !:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

Ricky

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Kaash woh yahan hote,
Hamari un siskiyon ko mehsoos kar pate !

Jo gume ashq dhool mein,
her khoye hue us ashq ki tanhai samajh pate !

Teri iss berukhi ne jo dhaya hai Qehar,
Kaash woh uss Qehar ka asar dekh pate !

Ashiqon ki tarah ashq humney toh bahaye hain,
Kaash woh inn ashqon ki ashiqi kaa haal dekh pate !

Kaash woh yahan hote !!


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nishita

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2004, 05:11:41 PM »

wow gud one ricky


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Pooja

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2004, 06:45:56 AM »

wah!!! bahoot khoob!!!


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Meena

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2004, 12:03:43 PM »

"her khoye hue us ashq ki tanhai samajh pate ! "

very very gud ricky ji! bohot ache. yeh line sabse zada achi lagi!

Usual Smile


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Ricky

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2004, 06:52:10 AM »

Shukriya ..


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Talat

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2004, 02:40:06 PM »

Wow Good one Ricky!!!


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sharmaarunkumar

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Re: Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #6 on: November 22, 2004, 05:19:11 PM »

Quote from: "Ricky"

Waah! Ricky ji!!! Very Nice!!

Ab Roz Bulaao bhi to woh aa nahin sakta!
Zindaan mein jo ho Qaid Kahin jaa nahin sakta!

Go Sab ki Nazar mein hai woh barsaat ka baadal,
Jhulsi hui Dhartee pe magar chha nahin sakta!

Halaat ki Choton ne use Itna sataaya,
"Gham" aur Khushi se woh yahan kha nahin sakta!

Maazi ki hi Yaadon mein na mashroof ho ay Dil,
Guzre hue lamhon ko Koi Laa nahin sakta!

Mehfil mein jo chup baitha hai use Koi na chhede,
Goonga hai azal se, woh ghazal gaa nahin sakta!

Khuddaar tha, Khud Daar ko ja usne hai choomaa,
Jallad koi us pe sitam Dhaa nahin sakta!

(NM)

{Jindaan : Qaid, Prison}


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Pooja

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #7 on: November 22, 2004, 05:23:11 PM »

wah!!! wah!!! bahoot khoob!!! yah lines to kamal hai>>>
Maazi ki hi Yaadon mein na mashroof ho ay Dil,
Guzre hue lamhon ko Koi Laa nahin sakta!

Mehfil mein jo chup baitha hai use Koi na chhede,
Goonga hai azal se, woh ghazal gaa nahin sakta!

Khuddaartha, Khud Daar ko ja usne hai choomaa,
Jallad koi us pe sitam Dhaa nahin sakta!
bahoot khoob AKS JI!!!!!


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sharmaarunkumar

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #8 on: November 22, 2004, 05:24:27 PM »

Shukriya ji Pooja ji!!!


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Meena

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #9 on: November 24, 2004, 04:30:35 PM »

nice


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nishita

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #10 on: November 24, 2004, 05:16:07 PM »

wah sharmaji and pooja


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sharmaarunkumar

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2004, 02:13:16 AM »

Thanx Meena ji N Nishita ji!!


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Talat

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2004, 10:43:42 AM »

Wah!! Arunji!! n Pooja!!!

Bhichre to qurbaton ki dua bhi na kar sake
Ab ke tujhe supurd-e-khuda bhi na kar sake
khush bhi na rakh sake tujhe hum apni chah main
Achi tarah se tujh ko khafa bhi na kar sake!!!
(NM)


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waheed_rose2004

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2004, 11:35:27 AM »

wah!!!!!!!!! ricky........arun bhai........talat........

Kaash kuch dayr younhi waqt guzarta rehta
Mein ussey dekhta rehta wo sawarta rehta
Usko jaana tha koi Zakhm hi dekar jaata
Iss bahaney, main usse yaad to karta rehta...........


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budhu_1

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Mehsoos kar pate !

«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2004, 01:42:58 PM »

that was very good wahhed and ricky beleive me twas awesome uff just touche the heart man twas kew!!!
keeo it up guys


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