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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2013, 02:07:45 PM » |
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waah neha ji superb lines very good keep writing
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2013, 02:20:16 PM » |
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waah neha ji superb lines very good keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2013, 02:25:02 PM » |
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ur welcome dear
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2013, 02:30:05 PM » |
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Neha ji Dil mein itna dard ~~~ but really lovely poem
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2013, 02:31:41 PM » |
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bahut khoob ummeed rakkho
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2013, 02:32:35 PM » |
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Wallaah kya khoob sher ke saath aaghaaz kiya hai tumne is khoobsurat nazm ko neha..... bahot bahot pasand aaya wo sher kaanch ke tukdoN pe bharosaa is just wowwwww.... likhti raho..
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2013, 02:40:05 PM » |
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2013, 02:40:37 PM » |
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Neha ji Dil mein itna dard ~~~ but really lovely poem
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2013, 02:41:47 PM » |
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bahut khoob ummeed rakkho
hmmmm umeed pe duniya kaayam hai....kaash hamari kismat hamare intezaar par fida ho kar usse milwa hi de...
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«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2013, 02:42:30 PM » |
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Wallaah kya khoob sher ke saath aaghaaz kiya hai tumne is khoobsurat nazm ko neha..... bahot bahot pasand aaya wo sher kaanch ke tukdoN pe bharosaa is just wowwwww.... likhti raho..
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bahot bahot shukiya aapka...
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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2013, 03:07:50 PM » |
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«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2013, 03:21:51 PM » |
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Sambhaal Ke Rakh Jo B Khali Se Khwab Hain Kyon Ki Roz Subah Nikalta Ik Naya Aaftab Hai.
Khuda Aapko Sukoon Bakshey Aur Aapko Jiska Intezar Hai Usse Jald Hi Aapko Mila De...
Bahut Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Neha Sis
Shad o Aabaad Rahiye
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2013, 03:23:27 PM » |
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Sambhaal Ke Rakh Jo B Khali Se Khwab Hain Kyon Ki Roz Subah Nikalta Ik Naya Aaftab Hai.
Khuda Aapko Sukoon Bakshey Aur Aapko Jiska Intezar Hai Usse Jald Hi Aapko Mila De...
Bahut Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Neha Sis
Shad o Aabaad Rahiye
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