Mere ghar ke samane... mann

by mann.mann on February 11, 2012, 03:30:18 AM
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Umar bhar wo chahta tha rahna mere saamane.
Ghar basa liya hai usne mere ghar ke saamane.

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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2012, 05:29:20 AM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on February 11, 2012, 03:30:18 AM
Umar bhar wo chahta tha rahna mere saamane.
Ghar basa liya hai usne mere ghar ke saamane.

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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2012, 05:35:59 AM »
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mann.mann ji

nice thought you have expressed in
your post.

All the best.

I have also tried long back this
type of thought in one of my
old ghazal's maqta....

"मुद्दत के बाद मिल गयी मंज़िल मुझे 'रक़ीब'
 उसके ही घर से घर भी लगा मिल गया मुझे"
   
       --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

 
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bahut bahut dhanyawad satishji..

bahut khub kaha hai aapne wo puri ghazal padne ka mann ho raha hai ji.. jis ghazal ka ye maqta hai...
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