mere hisse mein to..........

by wazida on August 21, 2010, 03:58:28 PM
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gulsitaan de diye tumne in kharro ko,
mere hisse me to ek shabnam nhi...
humsafar humse ab chhod de umeedein,
 sath hum kya denge hum mein ab dum nhi.
tumse shikwa kre yaar hum kis tarah,
tum to tum hi rhe ,hum magar hum nhi.
koun hai duniya me jis ko sab kuch mila,
humko sab kuch mila bas mile tum nhi....
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 10:10:15 PM »
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Wazida Sahibaa Aadaab!

Kia kahe aapki shayari ko behad khoob...
Aapke khayaal aur andaaz e bayaan behad umdaa raha..

Dil se daad kabool kiijye...
Likhati rahiye...
Khush rahiye...
Khuda hafez.....



Tu khush hai mujhse bichadkar
mujhko bhi ab koyiN gham nahi

Mile khushiyaaN tujhko ae jaaN
Mere liye do jahaN se kam nahi
         
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2010, 03:09:52 PM »
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ji shuqriya.....
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2010, 04:45:41 PM »
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wahhhhhh kya kehne wazida ji..kya khub likha hai..last lines to bht hi pyari hain
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2010, 04:49:23 PM »
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Wazida Ji Lajawaab!!!!!

Aaj Pehli Baar Aapko padha hai,bahut hi khoob likha ahi aapne..

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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2010, 04:53:17 PM »
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tum to aapne the to kyu hath na badaya mujh tak......
dubne wale ko to  gair b bacha lete hain........
 
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