mere kismat main tu nahi

by nadia brohi on April 13, 2010, 12:04:54 PM

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Waqt or halaat ke saat badalna mere fitrat nahi
kyun k tum se milna ab mere taqdeer main nahi.

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Re: mere kismat main tu nahi

«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 12:07:03 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Nadia Ji


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Re: mere kismat main tu nahi

«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 12:12:27 PM »

Wah kya baat hai Nadia brohi ji.......

Ham samjhota kabhi karte kisise nahi
samjhenge hamhari kismat main tu nahi......


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Re: mere kismat main tu nahi

«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2010, 12:14:26 PM »

Bahot khoob Nadia ji. Achha likha hai.


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Re: mere kismat main tu nahi

«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2010, 01:32:47 PM »

Nadia jee "mere fitrat" nahi "meri fitrat" hona chahiye tha pehle misre me...........aur dusri baat aapke dono misre matlab pehli lines aur dusri lines ek doosre se bilkool juda hai......main samajh nahi paya ke sher ka asal message kya hai......bura na maniyega aap hi ke lafzo ko thoda modify kiya hai taki aapko ek idea mil sake....sher kehne ka.

Badalna waqt ke sath jo meri fitrat hoti
Meri taqdeer tu hoti meri kismat hoti...

Ummeed karta hu meri islah aapki narazgi ka sabab nahi banegi....Allah aapke kalam ko takat aur khobbsuti bakshe...AAMEEN