MERE LABO SE MERI..........(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on October 18, 2008, 06:53:53 AM
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MUJHSE WOH APNI KHUSHI MANG RAHE HAIN
MERE LABO SE MERI HASEE MANG RAHE HAIN

AUR JINKO SAMAJTE THE HUM APNI ZINDAGI
MUJSE WOH MERI ZINDAGI MANG RAHE HAIN

QABR PE MERI KUCH NAHI BAS EK CHIRAG HAIN TANHA
AUR MUJSE WOH MERI YEH RAUSHNI MANG RAHE HAIN

GHAYEL KUCH NA BOLE HO JAYE BEZUBAAN
MUJSE WOH AAJ MERI SHAYRI MANG RAHE HAIN

                            -SAJID GHAYEL-  tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2008, 07:04:06 AM »
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Too good.. As Always.. Applause Applause
Khayaalon ka poora khajaana hai aapke paas.. Sajid ji..

Likhte Rahiyega... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2008, 08:44:31 AM »
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MUJHSE WOH APNI KHUSHI MANG RAHE HAIN
MERE LABO SE MERI HASEE MANG RAHE HAIN

AUR JINKO SAMAJTE THE HUM APNI ZINDAGI
MUJSE WOH MERI ZINDAGI MANG RAHE HAIN

QABR PE MERI KUCH NAHI BAS EK CHIRAG HAIN TANHA
AUR MUJSE WOH MERI YEH RAUSHNI MANG RAHE HAIN

GHAYEL KUCH NA BOLE HO JAYE BEZUBAAN
MUJSE WOH AAJ MERI SHAYRI MANG RAHE HAIN

                            -SAJID GHAYEL-  tearyeyed


Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji   Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2008, 09:12:48 AM »
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VERY NICE LINES SAJID SAHAB Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2008, 02:30:02 PM »
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Bohat khoob Sajid ji ..achcha likha hai aapne... Applause
Hamesha ki tarah bohat khoob... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2008, 03:15:11 PM »
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Nice One Sajid Bhai
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2008, 01:44:42 PM »
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MUJHSE WOH APNI KHUSHI MANG RAHE HAIN
MERE LABO SE MERI HASEE MANG RAHE HAIN

AUR JINKO SAMAJTE THE HUM APNI ZINDAGI
MUJSE WOH MERI ZINDAGI MANG RAHE HAIN

QABR PE MERI KUCH NAHI BAS EK CHIRAG HAIN TANHA
AUR MUJSE WOH MERI YEH RAUSHNI MANG RAHE HAIN

GHAYEL KUCH NA BOLE HO JAYE BEZUBAAN
MUJSE WOH AAJ MERI SHAYRI MANG RAHE HAIN

                            -SAJID GHAYEL-  tearyeyed


Uski To Aadat Hai, Maangne Ki Pooraani "Azeem,.
De De Jo Bhi Hai Paas Tere, Ek Gham Hi Wo Leta Nahi,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-

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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2008, 05:23:55 PM »
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Uski To Aadat Hai, Maangne Ki Pooraani "Azeem,.
De De Jo Bhi Hai Paas Tere, Ek Gham Hi Wo Leta Nahi,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-



Beautiful Sher Chote  Clapping Smiley

Sabkuch lutaya jinpe kehne lage woh ek roz
Kaisa muflis hain yeh GHAYEL, bheekh dene par leta nahi

                                     -SG-
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2008, 05:27:16 PM »
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MUJHSE WOH APNI KHUSHI MANG RAHE HAIN
MERE LABO SE MERI HASEE MANG RAHE HAIN

AUR JINKO SAMAJTE THE HUM APNI ZINDAGI
MUJSE WOH MERI ZINDAGI MANG RAHE HAIN

QABR PE MERI KUCH NAHI BAS EK CHIRAG HAIN TANHA
AUR MUJSE WOH MERI YEH RAUSHNI MANG RAHE HAIN

GHAYEL KUCH NA BOLE HO JAYE BEZUBAAN
MUJSE WOH AAJ MERI SHAYRI MANG RAHE HAIN

                            -SAJID GHAYEL-  tearyeyed

Nice Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2008, 05:47:46 PM »
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Shukriya Rajesh
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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2008, 04:02:47 PM »
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Beautiful Sher Chote  Clapping Smiley

Sabkuch lutaya jinpe kehne lage woh ek roz
Kaisa muflis hain yeh GHAYEL, bheekh dene par leta nahi

                     
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Bheek Me Bhi Ab Khushi Nahi Milti "Azeem,.
Log Jalne Lage Hain, Meri Jhooti Hasi Dekh Kar,.

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«Reply #11 on: December 24, 2008, 08:25:14 PM »
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MUJHSE WOH APNI KHUSHI MANG RAHE HAIN
MERE LABO SE MERI HASEE MANG RAHE HAIN

AUR JINKO SAMAJTE THE HUM APNI ZINDAGI
MUJSE WOH MERI ZINDAGI MANG RAHE HAIN

QABR PE MERI KUCH NAHI BAS EK CHIRAG HAIN TANHA
AUR MUJSE WOH MERI YEH RAUSHNI MANG RAHE HAIN

GHAYEL KUCH NA BOLE HO JAYE BEZUBAAN
MUJSE WOH AAJ MERI SHAYRI MANG RAHE HAIN

                            -SAJID GHAYEL-  tearyeyed


wah wah wah wah...koi lavz nahin mil raha hai jisse apki tarif kar sakun...bahaut hi khoob likha hai...har lavz main ek gheri soch hai jisse bahaut khoobsoorati se bayan kia hai apne...bahaut din bad kuch dil ko choo gaya....dil main uttar gaya...



mujse woh mere ansu mang rahe hai,
sahara deti hui meri rooh mang rahe hai...

dil ko mardia unki bewaffai ne,
nilami karne ke liye humari kabar mang rahe hai...

likha karte the hum unki shaan main aaj bewaffai pe likh rahe hai,
aaj dekho humse humara kalam mang rahe hai...

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«Reply #12 on: December 24, 2008, 08:28:59 PM »
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very well said Janasheen and equally good reply from Ghayel jee
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«Reply #13 on: December 24, 2008, 09:50:39 PM »
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MUJHSE WOH APNI KHUSHI MANG RAHE HAIN
MERE LABO SE MERI HASEE MANG RAHE HAIN

AUR JINKO SAMAJTE THE HUM APNI ZINDAGI
MUJSE WOH MERI ZINDAGI MANG RAHE HAIN

QABR PE MERI KUCH NAHI BAS EK CHIRAG HAIN TANHA
AUR MUJSE WOH MERI YEH RAUSHNI MANG RAHE HAIN

GHAYEL KUCH NA BOLE HO JAYE BEZUBAAN
MUJSE WOH AAJ MERI SHAYRI MANG RAHE HAIN

                            -SAJID GHAYEL-  tearyeyed

Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai shaayad pasand aaye

Khusiyaan tu luta do unke liye
Hansi bhi tu luta do unke liye

Agar woh hai such hi teri zindagi
To de do use apni saari zindagi

Chord kar chale gaye ho unhe tanha
To de do unko apne kabr mein panha

Kyon ho gaye itne mein to bezubaan
Kuch to unka haq hai de do usko maan
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«Reply #14 on: December 24, 2008, 10:14:57 PM »
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bahaut achi koshish hai...likte rahiye...
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