mere TAKIYE pe jo tera ek BAAL reh gaya...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 14, 2012, 04:51:38 PM
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wafa nahi,hume thodi si bewafaai chahiye,, aapke sung chand lamhon ki tahaai chahiye,, aapki yaadon ke sahare jeete hain hum,, par zinda rehne ko hume judaai chahiye....

bas thodi si bewafaai chahiye....................



Ishq ka namoona ye kamaal reh gaya.
Har ghazal me uska khayaal reh gaya.

Saaf kiye makdee ke jaale to bahut,
Bas ye mere jee ka janjaaal reh gaya.

Pyar ke sab rang to mitaa diye usne,
Sirf maang meN kuch laal reh gaya.

Laakh huiN bewafaaiyaaN, yahaaN,
Phir v mohabbat ka jamaal reh gaya.

Imtihaan-e-jeest me mujhse har baar,
Jawaab to kabhi koi sawaal reh gaya.

Ab dekh kar hi khush ho leta hooN main,
Mere takiye pe jo tera ek baal reh gaya.

Bahut badle maine v naam apne 'Taish'
Par dard ko mera pata khalyaal reh gaya.

14/11/12
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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2012, 04:57:52 PM »
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Bahut khoob ghayal jee
mere tkiye pe jo tera ek baal rah gaya...wah wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2012, 12:37:26 AM »
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bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2012, 01:45:39 AM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on November 14, 2012, 04:51:38 PM
wafa nahi,hume thodi si bewafaai chahiye,, aapke sung chand lamhon ki tahaai chahiye,, aapki yaadon ke sahare jeete hain hum,, par zinda rehne ko hume judaai chahiye....

bas thodi si bewafaai chahiye....................



Ishq ka namoona ye kamaal reh gaya.
Har ghazal me uska khayaal reh gaya.

Saaf kiye makdee ke jaale to bahut,
Bas ye mere jee ka janjaaal reh gaya.

Pyar ke sab rang to mitaa diye usne,
Sirf maang meN kuch laal reh gaya.

Laakh huiN bewafaaiyaaN, yahaaN,
Phir v mohabbat ka jamaal reh gaya.

Imtihaan-e-jeest me mujhse har baar,
Jawaab to kabhi koi sawaal reh gaya.

Ab dekh kar hi khush ho leta hooN main,
Mere takiye pe jo tera ek baal reh gaya.

Bahut badle maine v naam apne 'Taish'
Par dard ko mera pata khalyaal reh gaya.

14/11/12
taish jee kya umda ghazal kahi hai,

Ab dekh kar hi khush ho leta hooN main,

Mere takiye pe jo tera ek baal reh gaya.

is shair ka to jawab nahi hai, daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2012, 04:57:11 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Behad Shandaar Zabardast Creation Ghayal Sahab ........
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«Reply #5 on: November 15, 2012, 06:18:01 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 14, 2012, 04:57:52 PM
Bahut khoob ghayal jee
mere tkiye pe jo tera ek baal rah gaya...wah wah wah
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MKV ji, humari khushnaseebi ki aapko ye adni si peshkash pasand ayi, bas yuNhi aap aage v hausla afzaayi karte raheN...
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«Reply #6 on: November 15, 2012, 09:02:02 AM »
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achi  ghazal  hai  Taish  ji  . Bahut  mubarakaad . Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: November 15, 2012, 11:44:36 AM »
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wonderful
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2012, 04:39:34 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 15, 2012, 01:45:39 AM
taish jee kya umda ghazal kahi hai,

Ab dekh kar hi khush ho leta hooN main,

Mere takiye pe jo tera ek baal reh gaya.

is shair ka to jawab nahi hai, daaad qubool kareN



aarish sahab, aapki tareef, maayne rakhti hai, jaan kar bahut khushi hui ki aapko vo sher aur usska khayal pasand aaya, bas yuNhi saath dete rahiye... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: November 15, 2012, 05:49:49 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 14, 2012, 04:51:38 PM
wafa nahi,hume thodi si bewafaai chahiye,, aapke sung chand lamhon ki tahaai chahiye,, aapki yaadon ke sahare jeete hain hum,, par zinda rehne ko hume judaai chahiye....

bas thodi si bewafaai chahiye....................



Ishq ka namoona ye kamaal reh gaya.
Har ghazal me uska khayaal reh gaya.

Saaf kiye makdee ke jaale to bahut,
Bas ye mere jee ka janjaaal reh gaya.

Pyar ke sab rang to mitaa diye usne,
Sirf maang meN kuch laal reh gaya.

Laakh huiN bewafaaiyaaN, yahaaN,
Phir v mohabbat ka jamaal reh gaya.

Imtihaan-e-jeest me mujhse har baar,
Jawaab to kabhi koi sawaal reh gaya.

Ab dekh kar hi khush ho leta hooN main,
Mere takiye pe jo tera ek baal reh gaya.

Bahut badle maine v naam apne 'Taish'
Par dard ko mera pata khalyaal reh gaya.

14/11/12
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«Reply #11 on: November 16, 2012, 12:42:05 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 16, 2012, 02:04:10 AM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on November 15, 2012, 04:57:11 AM
Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Behad Shandaar Zabardast Creation Ghayal Sahab ........

Bahut bahut shukriya kaushal ji, bas aap yuNhi saath dete raheN to hum aage v yuNhi likhte rehne ki kosish karte raheNge...
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«Reply #13 on: November 16, 2012, 02:10:00 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 14, 2012, 04:51:38 PM
wafa nahi,hume thodi si bewafaai chahiye,, aapke sung chand lamhon ki tahaai chahiye,, aapki yaadon ke sahare jeete hain hum,, par zinda rehne ko hume judaai chahiye....

bas thodi si bewafaai chahiye....................



Ishq ka namoona ye kamaal reh gaya.
Har ghazal me uska khayaal reh gaya.

Saaf kiye makdee ke jaale to bahut,
Bas ye mere jee ka janjaaal reh gaya.

Pyar ke sab rang to mitaa diye usne,
Sirf maang meN kuch laal reh gaya.

Laakh huiN bewafaaiyaaN, yahaaN,
Phir v mohabbat ka jamaal reh gaya.

Imtihaan-e-jeest me mujhse har baar,
Jawaab to kabhi koi sawaal reh gaya.

Ab dekh kar hi khush ho leta hooN main,
Mere takiye pe jo tera ek baal reh gaya.

Bahut badle maine v naam apne 'Taish'
Par dard ko mera pata khalyaal reh gaya.

14/11/12

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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 15, 2012, 09:02:02 AM
achi  ghazal  hai  Taish  ji  . Bahut  mubarakaad . Hasan

bahut bahut shukriya hasan sahab, bas yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN...
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