MERI IN UDAS AAKHON MEIN...SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on October 29, 2013, 07:44:19 PM
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hamare pass bhi sunane ko khubsurat tarane hua karte the
tohfe me dene ko unko gazalo.n ke nazraane hua karte the

unki madhosh nigaho.n se pikar gir gir ke sambhalte rahe
unki nashili aakhon me pure k pure maikhane hua karte the

hamare majnu se  haal par aaj hans lo chahe dunia walo.n
kabhi hum, tum jaise logo.n se jyada shyane hua karte the

bin kaaran ruth jana kai kai dino.n tak milne ko na aana
mujhse dur jane ke unke har roj naye bahane hua karte the

jheel ka kinara , kshti ka safar, phado.n par sham ka dhuan
hamare naseeb me bhi kabhi aise dilkash zmane hua karte the

uski ek bewfai ki thokar se dar-badar bhatkte phirte hai hum
jinki khatir hamare banaye taj jaise aashiyane hua karte the

meri in nam udas aakhon mein yeh viraani hamesa se na thi
unke bichhadne se pehle inmein khawab suhane hua karte the
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 08:08:33 PM »
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waah bohat achee ghazal hai soudagar jee
bohat c daad,.........
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 08:52:42 PM »
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Waaaaaaah... kya baat hai soudagar ji... bahut achchi ghazal... kaafi dinon baad padhne mili... is behtareen peshkash par hazaron hazaron dili daaad qubool kijiyega..
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 09:20:48 PM »
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beautiful peshkash
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 09:33:35 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 11:42:52 PM »
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Waaah .... ek bahaut hi achchhee ghazal saamne rakhi Soudagar ji .... daad aap ko !!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2013, 12:09:35 AM »
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wah waah waah waah Soudagar ji, kyaa feelings hain, kyaa andaaz-e-bayaan hai, kyaa shabdon ki khoobsoorti hai, sach mein mazaa aa gayaa padh ke, jaduu jaisaa asar hai aapke is rachnaa mein, bahut bahut khoob janaab....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2013, 12:29:03 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut bahut khoob karan bhai..
Par aajkal lagta hai kaafi busy ho..??
Dikhte hi nahi..Koi ni busy hi raho..achha hai..Laughing hard Laughing hard

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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2013, 02:35:06 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
dil khol kar likha hai aapne
bahut hi dilkash kalaam
hamare majnu se  haal par aaj hans lo chahe dunia walo.n
kabhi hum, tum jaise logo.n se jyada shyane hua karte the

bin kaaran ruth jana kai kai dino.n tak milne ko na aana
mujhse dur jane ke unke har roj naye bahane hua karte the

jheel ka kinara , kshti ka safar, phado.n par sham ka dhuan
hamare naseeb me bhi kabhi aise dilkash zmane hua karte the

uski ek bewfai ki thokar se dar-badar bhatkte phirte hai hum
jinki khatir hamare banaye taj jaise aashiyane hua karte the

meri in nam udas aakhon mein yeh viraani hamesa se na thi
unke bichhadne se pehle inmein khawab suhane hua karte the
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«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2013, 04:01:30 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on October 29, 2013, 07:44:19 PM
hamare pass bhi sunane ko khubsurat tarane hua karte the
tohfe me dene ko unko gazalo.n ke nazraane hua karte the
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
unki madhosh nigaho.n se pikar gir gir ke sambhalte rahe
unki nashili aakhon me pure k pure maikhane hua karte the
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardab maikhana band ho gaya kay
hamare majnu se  haal par aaj hans lo chahe dunia walo.n
kabhi hum, tum jaise logo.n se jyada shyane hua karte the
mohabbat ne hamko nikamma bana diya ghalib warna soudaagar bhi aadmi tha kaam ka icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
bin kaaran ruth jana kai kai dino.n tak milne ko na aana
mujhse dur jane ke unke har roj naye bahane hua karte the
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
jheel ka kinara , kshti ka safar, phado.n par sham ka dhuan
hamare naseeb me bhi kabhi aise dilkash zmane hua karte the
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
uski ek bewfai ki thokar se dar-badar bhatkte phirte hai hum
jinki khatir hamare banaye taj jaise aashiyane hua karte the
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
meri in nam udas aakhon mein yeh viraani hamesa se na thi
unke bichhadne se pehle inmein khawab suhane hua karte the
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2013, 12:25:59 PM »
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superb shayari. love9 love9 love9 love9
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2013, 12:28:34 PM »
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superb lines karan ji waah waah waah waah bas waah
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«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2013, 12:13:47 AM »
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hamare pass bhi sunane ko khubsurat tarane hua karte the
tohfe me dene ko unko gazalo.n ke nazraane hua karte the

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bahut hi khoobsoorat kalaam saudagar ji
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«Reply #14 on: November 22, 2013, 08:47:48 PM »
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shukriya laaiba ji
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