MILAY NA TUM TO ADOO SE....:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

N.R.MALIK

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4RM MY OWN KALAM.....

MILAY NA TUM TO ADOO SE DOSTI KAR LEE...
ISS TARAH SE ZINDAGI BASAR KER LEE...

NA KIA SHIQWA NA KOI SHIKAYAT HUM NE...
KUCH ISS TARAH SE GUZAR KAR LEE...

LUB HILANAY KO THA HI KYA HUMDAM...
USHI SUBHA KO HUM NE SEHAR KAR LEE...

PIROYA NA TAQDIR NE TUME MERE HAAR MAI...
HALAY BESUMER SE HUM NE SHAJAR KAR LEE...

FASANAYE TAQDIR MAI VOH UNWAAN KAHAN NADEEM...?
HALAY RAFTA SE HUM NE HI QAMUR KAR LEE...

HOPE U FEEL IT...

<FAISALNADEEM2002@YAHOO.COM>
HOPE U LIKE IT


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: MILAY NA TUM TO ADOO SE....

«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2008, 07:17:06 AM »

Something that can be felt
and definitely liked Applause

Wonderful Malik Ji


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: MILAY NA TUM TO ADOO SE....

«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2008, 08:34:19 PM »

...Nadeem bhaijaan it's really awesome...keep going...


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Talat

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Re: MILAY NA TUM TO ADOO SE....

«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2008, 11:01:33 PM »

Pehle padh ke laga jaise ko Movie - Anokhi Raat ka song ho :

"Mile na phool to kaanton se dosti kar li,
Kuch is tarah se hume basar zindagi kar li"

Lekin baaqi lines padh ke pata chala....ek baar phir se ek khoobsurat ghazal aapne qalamband ki hai.......Bohot Khoob Applause

NR Malik Ji


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sanjiv salil

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Re: MILAY NA TUM TO ADOO SE....

«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2008, 05:33:39 AM »

नकल न कर कुछ असल लिखो तुम
संजीव सलिल read2


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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Re: MILAY NA TUM TO ADOO SE....

«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2008, 09:24:56 PM »

bohat khoob behtareen Malik ji........ Applause


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Muhammed

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Re: MILAY NA TUM TO ADOO SE....

«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2008, 07:15:03 AM »

Quote from: N.R.MALIK on November 07, 2008, 06:45:15 AM

Nadeem Bhai..chaliye wade k Mutabiq aapke Ash'aar bhi padh liye
waqaee bahot hi achhe Lage..Lafz bhi saaf va suffaf Nazar aayeiN.

Bas aise hi Likhte Rahiye..
Yo.pe aate Jaate Rahiye..
Aur Urdu Pechida Lafz K Maa'ne bhi Likh diya Kare,,Taki Aam Log bhi Use samaz sake.

Bahot Khub..Nadeem bhai


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