Mohabbat ka Anjaam !!!

by deepika_divya on February 06, 2010, 03:04:32 PM
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Jisse Be-Panahaa Mohabaat thi
Woh Ashiq Mera Badnaam Nikla

Mere Liye Jo Hazaaro mea Ak tha
Woh Deewaana Mera Aaam Nikla

Jisse Thi Humko Shikaayatein Hazaar
Unn Shikwo Mea Mera Naam Nikla

Jisko Manaa tha Maine Apni Subah
Woh Raahgir Mera Shaam Nikla

Hone Lagi  Khudse Nafratein ab
Yea Kaisa Mohabbat ka Anjaam Nikla



~~DiVya~~
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 04:25:34 PM »
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Bahut khoob divya ji...kuch lines meri taraf se bhi...

beintahaa mohabbat ka kyun ye anjaam hota hai?
wafa ki galiyon me kyun roj katl-e-aam hota hai?

kisi bewafa ki yaad me sadiyaan guzaar de,
ye dard-o-gam ishq-o-zunoo ka mukaam hota hai....
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2010, 04:38:13 PM »
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Nice poem Sophi ji.
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2010, 11:49:22 AM »
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Quote from: Neel1525 on February 06, 2010, 04:25:34 PM
Bahut khoob divya ji...kuch lines meri taraf se bhi...

beintahaa mohabbat ka kyun ye anjaam hota hai?
wafa ki galiyon me kyun roj katl-e-aam hota hai?

kisi bewafa ki yaad me sadiyaan guzaar de,
ye dard-o-gam ishq-o-zunoo ka mukaam hota hai....



Bahoot Bahoot Shukriya Neel Ji

Waah Kya baat hai Aapne Bhi Bahoot Umda likha hai.. Bahoot Khoob!

Thank you so much
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 11:49:52 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 06, 2010, 04:38:13 PM
Nice poem Sophi ji.

Thank you so Much Riyaz ji !
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 12:52:26 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Divya..

har baar ki Tarah..Tooo Goood!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 01:34:29 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 06, 2010, 03:04:32 PM
Jisse Be-Panahaa Mohabaat thi
Woh Ashiq Mera Badnaam Nikla

Mere Liye Jo Hazaaro mea Ak tha
Woh Deewaana Mera Aaam Nikla

Jisse Thi Humko Shikaayatein Hazaar
Unn Shikwo Mea Mera Naam Nikla

Jisko Manaa tha Maine Apni Subah
Woh Raahgir Mera Shaam Nikla

Hone Lagi  Khudse Nafratein ab
Yea Kaisa Mohabbat ka Anjaam Nikla



~~DiVya~~

bahoot hi klhoob tarannum me likhi gai hai ye ghazal....waaah..sophi aapki likhi hui behtreen ghazalon me se ek.....dheron daad kabool hon aapko

samjhe the wasl-e-gujarish jise
wo purja judai ka farmaan nikla,

mukammal azadi ka dum bharne wala,
jhoothi ravayton ka ghulaam nikla,

sajaya tha maathe pe sehra samajh-kar,
meri aakhri rukhsati ka samaan nikla
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2010, 01:43:09 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 08, 2010, 12:52:26 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Divya..

har baar ki Tarah..Tooo Goood!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Khwaish ji.. Thank you so much For such a nice Appreciation.
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«Reply #8 on: February 08, 2010, 01:44:43 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 08, 2010, 01:34:29 PM
bahoot hi klhoob tarannum me likhi gai hai ye ghazal....waaah..sophi aapki likhi hui behtreen ghazalon me se ek.....dheron daad kabool hon aapko

samjhe the wasl-e-gujarish jise
wo purja judai ka farmaan nikla,

mukammal azadi ka dum bharne wala,
jhoothi ravayton ka ghulaam nikla,

sajaya tha maathe pe sehra samajh-kar,
meri aakhri rukhsati ka samaan nikla






Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Sanjeev ji... Aapka Tahe dil se Shukriyaa Hausla Afzaai karne ke liye .. Thank you !

Kya baat hai Sanjeev ji... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob LIkha hai aapne Bhi... Teeno sher Bahoot Umda hai ...
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«Reply #9 on: February 08, 2010, 02:12:43 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 08, 2010, 01:34:29 PM
bahoot hi klhoob tarannum me likhi gai hai ye ghazal....waaah..sophi aapki likhi hui behtreen ghazalon me se ek.....dheron daad kabool hon aapko

samjhe the wasl-e-gujarish jise
wo purja judai ka farmaan nikla,

mukammal azadi ka dum bharne wala,
jhoothi ravayton ka ghulaam nikla,

sajaya tha maathe pe sehra samajh-kar,
meri aakhri rukhsati ka samaan nikla





bahut bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Jab bhi likhte ho,Chaa Jaate ho Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2010, 02:21:14 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 08, 2010, 01:44:43 PM

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Sanjeev ji... Aapka Tahe dil se Shukriyaa Hausla Afzaai karne ke liye .. Thank you !

Kya baat hai Sanjeev ji... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob LIkha hai aapne Bhi... Teeno sher Bahoot Umda hai ...
welcome sophi.....
aur sarahne ke liye shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2010, 02:22:34 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 08, 2010, 02:12:43 PM
bahut bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Jab bhi likhte ho,Chaa Jaate ho Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



bahooooot shukriya.....bro..
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«Reply #12 on: February 10, 2010, 03:52:26 AM »
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Wah Divya ji bahut dard aur khoobsurt kavita likhi aapne.Neel ji,Bearar ji aap dono ne bhi kamaal ke likha.great work.
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Quote from: madhuwesh on February 10, 2010, 03:52:26 AM
Wah Divya ji bahut dard aur khoobsurt kavita likhi aapne.Neel ji,Bearar ji aap dono ne bhi kamaal ke likha.great work.

Thank you so much sweetz
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«Reply #14 on: February 10, 2010, 05:37:17 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 06, 2010, 03:04:32 PM
Jisse Be-Panahaa Mohabaat thi
Woh Ashiq Mera Badnaam Nikla

Mere Liye Jo Hazaaro mea Ak tha
Woh Deewaana Mera Aaam Nikla

Jisse Thi Humko Shikaayatein Hazaar
Unn Shikwo Mea Mera Naam Nikla

Jisko Manaa tha Maine Apni Subah
Woh Raahgir Mera Shaam Nikla

Hone Lagi  Khudse Nafratein ab
Yea Kaisa Mohabbat ka Anjaam Nikla



~~DiVya~~

Bahut dard se likha hai aur bahut accha bi divya dear  Thumbs UP
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