~ * Na Aaya * ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on August 26, 2010, 02:18:33 PM
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Tere dil me apne pyar se jagga bana na aaya,

hamesha chaha sirf tuje hi,

kya muje hi pyar karna na aaya?

fir gai aankhen teri kyu muje dekh kar,

muje teri tarah bewfai karna na aaya....
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 05:44:03 PM »
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Hmm.. nice dev but it cud b more better...
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2010, 06:22:27 PM »
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Dev jee aapki paheli do lines meiN bahut jyada gadbad hai shayad spel mistake ho per samjh meiN nahi aaya... BBL jee ne sahi farmaya hai ke yeh aur bhi behter ban sakta hai...           
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2010, 08:48:25 AM »
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sukriya geet di, mene kuchh change kiye he, bataiyega thik he ki nahi....


Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 26, 2010, 05:44:03 PM
Hmm.. nice dev but it cud b more better...
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2010, 08:52:19 AM »
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waah ji waah... bahut khoob.. maine subah padha tha tab mazaa nahi aaya to maine comment nahi kiya... ab isme baat hi kuch aur hai.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2010, 12:36:59 PM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on August 26, 2010, 02:18:33 PM



Tere dil me apne pyar se jagga bana na aaya,

hamesha chaha sirf tuje hi,

kya muje hi pyar karna na aaya?

fir gai aankhen teri kyu muje dekh kar,

muje teri tarah bewfai karna na aaya....

Ab bahut badhiya hai bus thoda change karna chahungi...

Tere dil me apne pyar se jagga bana na aaya,
hamesha chaha sirf tuje hi maine,
kya aaj tak mujhe hi pyar karna na aaya?
fir gayi aankhe teri kyun mujhe dekh kar,
kyun aaj tak tujhe merre pyar pe aetbaar karna na aaya?....
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2010, 08:49:30 PM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on August 26, 2010, 02:18:33 PM



Tere dil me apne pyar se jagga bana na aaya,

hamesha chaha sirf tuje hi,

kya muje hi pyar karna na aaya?

fir gai aankhen teri kyu muje dekh kar,

muje teri tarah bewfai karna na aaya....

Bahut khoob Dev Ji
Spelling errors ittiyadi sudhaar kar pa.dha maine
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2010, 08:20:29 AM »
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bahot bahot sukriya geet di comments or change karne ke liye...
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2010, 08:21:49 AM »
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hmm bahut badhiya bahut khoob ji~
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2010, 08:48:26 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on August 28, 2010, 08:20:29 AM
bahot bahot sukriya geet di comments or change karne ke liye...
Ur most welcome dev u right really well bus thoda aur practice ki zarurat hai...all the best take cre...
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2010, 08:50:26 AM »
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sure geet di i will try my best....
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2010, 08:51:57 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2010, 09:18:34 AM »
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Ek "na" aur chahiye Geet-di....
Nice work Devangi-ben...tame tou badha record todi nahakhso....keep it up...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 27, 2010, 12:36:59 PM
Ab bahut badhiya hai bus thoda change karna chahungi...

Tere dil me apne pyar se jagga banana na aaya,
hamesha chaha sirf tuje hi maine,
kya aaj tak mujhe hi pyar karna na aaya?
fir gayi aankhe teri kyun mujhe dekh kar,
kyun aaj tak tujhe merre pyar pe aetbaar karna na aaya?....

Taarij vaat ne beeja shabdo ma kahu chhu.....

Tere dil me pyaar mein jagaa na payee
Chaaha tujhe he sirf par bataa na payee
Mein tujhe apna pyaar jataa naa paayee

Tu meri aankh me jhankh kar bhi samajh na payaa
Nahi Samjhi kya tujhe bhi pyaar jatana nahi aaya
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2010, 09:22:43 AM »
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good work koyal...
keep it up.....  Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause ++
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