nahi udaas kahan hun mai

by vikas2210 on July 13, 2005, 11:10:30 AM
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Na janay kion mera kajal
jab bhi dalo ankhoon main
ab aksar phail jata hai
main roi tou nahi hoon

Tum tou jaantay hi ho in dinoon
Buhat hi thand hoti hai
tab hi hai surkh meri naak
main roi tou nahi hoon

kaha tou hai keh yunhi bas
bheega hai anchal ka kona
choro tum fikar mat karo
main roii tou nahi hoon

nahi udass kab hoon main
ziyada kaam hai bas
tahakawat tou ho hi jaati hai
main roii tou nahi hoon

Bahaar aii hai , woh ab bhi
nahi aata tou na aye
ab uski yaad main dekho
main roii tou nahi hoon

Bata daynaa usko jaa kar
koi khush fehmi na palay
Waisey hi surkh hain akhain
main roi tou nahi hoon
 (n/m)
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2005, 11:15:10 AM »
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jab se isko phda hai jahan mai bas gayee thi kai dino se tamanna thi aap sabse share karne ki. aaj mauka mila to likh diya.
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2005, 05:36:01 PM »
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wah wah vikas ji..such a touching poem...bohot achi lagi mujhe!!!

pochte hai log humse humari nam ankhon ke bare me,
kehe dete hai ke tinka chala gaya ankhon me humare!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2005, 03:50:47 AM »
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thanks meena ji. will convey this to .......

u have written very nice.

nam aankho kyon hoti hai agar jaan lo tum
shayad mere dil ka haal bhi jaan lo tum

milte they jab unse khusi se roo padhte they
nahi milte to nam har samay rahti hai aankhe
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2005, 06:06:25 AM »
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Kachi deewar hoon thokar na lagana mujko
Apni nazron mein basa kar na giraana mujko  
Tumko aankho mein tasavur ki tarah rakhta hoon
Dil mein dadkan ki tarah tum bhi basana mujko !  
Baat karnay mein jo mushkil ho tumhay mehfil mein
Main samajh jaaonga nazron say bataana mujko !
Vaada utna hi karo jitna nibha saktay ho
Khawab poora jo na ho woh na dikhana mujko !
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2005, 06:13:01 AM »
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Ghunda ji bahoot khoob.

adhure khawab hai
tumhare intezaar mai
adhure hum hai.
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2005, 03:31:32 PM »
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thanks meena ji. will convey this to .......

you have written very nice.

nam aankho kyon hoti hai agar jaan lo tum
shayad mere dil ka haal bhi jaan lo tum

milte they jab unse khusi se roo padhte they
nahi milte to nam har samay rahti hai aankhe


gud one vikas ji aur shukriya!!

yaad unki ati hai to meri ankho nme chale aate hai,
kuch pal teher kar khud ba khud behe jate hai!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2005, 05:18:35 AM »
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nami ko chupa lo aankho mai
tumhari kismat acchi hai
yaad main koi to saath hai
mera haal na pucho  
tarse hai nami ko bhi ab
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2005, 05:22:49 AM »
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nami ko chupa lo aankho mai
tumhari kismat acchi hai
yaad main koi to saath hai
mera haal na pucho  
tarse hai nami ko bhi ab
nice
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2005, 09:23:51 AM »
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nami ko chupa lo aankho mai
tumhari kismat acchi hai
yaad main koi to saath hai
mera haal na pucho  
tarse hai nami ko bhi ab
nice


shukriya ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2005, 12:05:23 PM »
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nami ko chupa lo aankho mai
tumhari kismat acchi hai
yaad main koi to saath hai
mera haal na pucho  
tarse hai nami ko bhi ab


very nice!!!!!!!!!

na duayen mang ankhon ki nami ki aye dost,
pani ki aag ko tabasum se bih nahin buja paoge!
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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2005, 12:14:01 PM »
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ye ashqon ki mehfil sazi hai mere chehre pe
ye talaab na ban jaaye,
tabassum ki hawa ise na do toh accha hai
aisa na ho ki ye, sailaab ban jaaye.
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2005, 12:21:34 PM »
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very nice!!!

pani ki is dhara ko behne do,
zakhm gile ho jayenge, hone do,
kabhi to mitha ka dard ka ehesas bhi,
humare zakhmo ko hara tum rehne do!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2005, 12:31:03 PM »
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bahoot umda....nice...

Jakhmon ko seene main hi chhupa rakha tha abhi tak,
doond raha tha dard bhi uski mehzbaani ko
Ab tum aa gaye ho mere dost, main Farag hua
un Zakhmaon ko Tum haryaali do, ya paani do
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2005, 12:38:32 PM »
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shukriya...gud one as well!!!

har zakhm ki hoti gar dawa yaha,
to hum bhi le ate usse bazar se,
dosto se marham aab lagwate nahin hum,
ke bhara hota hai usme namak beshumar se!
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