nahi udaas kahan hun mai

by vikas2210 on July 13, 2005, 11:10:30 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 17, 2005, 12:45:33 PM »
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waah...intaha ho gayee is jakhamon ke dard ki...meena ji....ab toh ye haal hai..


Jakhmon se seena,
 chhalni hua jaata hai.
Kambakhat ab dard bhi pareshaan hai
ki kahaan se uthoon.


nahin maangta main Dawa mere Zakhamon ki
mere mehboob
abhi namak bahoot hai in dardon ko sehlaane ke liye...
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«Reply #16 on: July 17, 2005, 01:31:08 PM »
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Na janay kion mera kajal
jab bhi dalo ankhoon main
ab aksar phail jata hai
main roi tou nahi hoon

Tum tou jaantay hi ho in dinoon
Buhat hi thand hoti hai
tab hi hai surkh meri naak
main roi tou nahi hoon

kaha tou hai keh yunhi bas
bheega hai anchal ka kona
choro tum fikar mat karo
main roii tou nahi hoon

nahi udass kab hoon main
ziyada kaam hai bas
tahakawat tou ho hi jaati hai
main roii tou nahi hoon

Bahaar aii hai , woh ab bhi
nahi aata tou na aye
ab uski yaad main dekho
main roii tou nahi hoon

Bata daynaa usko jaa kar
koi khush fehmi na palay
Waisey hi surkh hain akhain
main roi tou nahi hoon  (n/m)


wah vikas,bohat hi acchi post hai,lovely.

nice one meena sis and harsh ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: July 18, 2005, 03:54:01 AM »
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nami ko chupa lo aankho mai
tumhari kismat acchi hai
yaad main koi to saath hai
mera haal na pucho  
tarse hai nami ko bhi ab


very nice!!!!!!!!!

na duayen mang ankhon ki nami ki aye dost,
pani ki aag ko tabasum se bih nahin buja paoge!


very nice meena ji

sush aankho ke takte hai tera rasta
diye ko jalane ke liye ab aansun kahan se laun
dil jala kar bhi dekha
par tere bin roshni kahan se laun.
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«Reply #18 on: July 18, 2005, 03:55:10 AM »
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ye ashqon ki mehfil sazi hai mere chehre pe
ye talaab na ban jaaye,
tabassum ki hawa ise na do toh accha hai
aisa na ho ki ye, sailaab ban jaaye.


bahut acche harash ji

ashkon ke talaab mein doob kar dekho
kambakhat tairna kaun chahta hai
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«Reply #19 on: July 18, 2005, 03:56:28 AM »
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very nice!!!

pani ki is dhara ko behne do,
zakhm gile ho jayenge, hone do,
kabhi to mitha ka dard ka ehesas bhi,
humare zakhmo ko hara tum rehne do!!


bahut milte hai dawa lagane wale
mujhe to ta zindgi intezar hai zakham dene wale ka
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«Reply #20 on: July 18, 2005, 03:59:35 AM »
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waah...intaha ho gayee is jakhamon ke dard ki...meena ji....ab toh ye haal hai..


Jakhmon se seena,
 chhalni hua jaata hai.
Kambakhat ab dard bhi pareshaan hai
ki kahaan se uthoon.


nahin maangta main Dawa mere Zakhamon ki
mere mehboob
abhi namak bahoot hai in dardon ko sehlaane ke liye...

harsh ji bahut khoob bahut hi khoob.

meena ji aapka bhi jawab nahi.
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«Reply #21 on: July 18, 2005, 04:00:33 AM »
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Na janay kion mera kajal
jab bhi dalo ankhoon main
ab aksar phail jata hai
main roi tou nahi hoon

Tum tou jaantay hi ho in dinoon
Buhat hi thand hoti hai
tab hi hai surkh meri naak
main roi tou nahi hoon

kaha tou hai keh yunhi bas
bheega hai anchal ka kona
choro tum fikar mat karo
main roii tou nahi hoon

nahi udass kab hoon main
ziyada kaam hai bas
tahakawat tou ho hi jaati hai
main roii tou nahi hoon

Bahaar aii hai , woh ab bhi
nahi aata tou na aye
ab uski yaad main dekho
main roii tou nahi hoon

Bata daynaa usko jaa kar
koi khush fehmi na palay
Waisey hi surkh hain akhain
main roi tou nahi hoon  (n/m)


wah vikas,bohat hi acchi post hai,lovely.

nice one meena sis and harsh ji Usual Smile


Thanx nidhi ji
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«Reply #22 on: July 18, 2005, 03:30:38 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya...aap bhi to bohot acha likhte hai vikas ji!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #23 on: July 18, 2005, 05:00:42 PM »
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Achha laga aapke vichaar jaanker nidhi ji our vikaas ji.......


ek arse se doobe hain in ashqon main,
ab sailaab bhi mujhe bhaane laga hai
tairna hamaari fitrat main shaamil nahi,
ab in ashqon main hi dil sambalene laga hai.

vikas2210 wrote....

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ashkon ke talaab mein doob kar dekho
kambakhat tairna kaun chahta hai
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«Reply #24 on: July 20, 2005, 10:25:50 AM »
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again very nice harash ji.

"Na sambhal paayi thi jis dil ko main ab tak,
  use tumare diye ashkon ne sambhala hai,
  chod gaye thhe tum mujhe jis manzar me,
  dekho khud ko kaise main usme dhaala hai."
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«Reply #25 on: July 20, 2005, 12:15:38 PM »
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again very nice harash ji.

"Na sambhal paayi thi jis dil ko main ab tak,
  use tumare diye ashkon ne sambhala hai,
  chod gaye thhe tum mujhe jis manzar me,
  dekho khud ko kaise main usme dhaala hai."


Very Beautiful........ Superb........ Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: July 20, 2005, 03:15:39 PM »
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bahoot khoobsoorati se anjaam diya hai apni baat ko nidhi ji...again very

muqadder ne jis our dakela hai o purnoor
ashqon ko is baat ka gam hone waala hai
manzron se pal pal khelna toh naseeb main tha hi
ab ye dil unke liye pathher ban ne waala hai.


 nidhi ji wrote...

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nice harash ji.

"Na sambhal paayi thi jis dil ko main ab tak,
use tumare diye ashkon ne sambhala hai,
chod gaye thhe tum mujhe jis manzar me,
dekho khud ko kaise main usme dhaala hai."
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«Reply #27 on: July 23, 2005, 06:38:30 AM »
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aap sab ne bahoot accha likha hai phadh kar maza aa gaya.

Ankho me ansu aa jate hai,
phir bhi labo pe hasi rakhni padti hai,
ye mohabbat bhi kya cheez hai yaaro,
jisse karte hai usi se chhupani padti hai...!!
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«Reply #28 on: July 23, 2005, 09:38:51 AM »
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wah very nice vikas ji...

Ikrar karne se pehle hi udasi ka jam pi liya hai,
Jab jana ke unone kab ka kisi aur ka pyar pa liya hai,
Hum kyu nahin samajhte ke mohabbat mere naseeb me nahin,
Jo aaj phir se rah-e-ishq ko azma liya hai?
Si liye hai hoonth, band kar li hai ankhen,
Aise hi aab wafa-e-dosti ada karte hai!
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«Reply #29 on: July 23, 2005, 11:11:06 AM »
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thanx and verry  goood meena ji

Meri khtaa ko tune wajah di
Bina baat ke bhi mujhko tune saza di
Shola tha dil main mere phle hi gum ka
Usper tune aur aag laga di.
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