..nahin sakta...

by dead heart on December 23, 2008, 08:51:10 PM
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iss bewaffaon se bhari duniya main; main jee nahin sakta,
marjaunga pyaase magar ek bewaffa ke diye ansu main pee nahin sakta...

ab adhuri nazar ati hai mujhe meri parchai bhi,
ghumon se bhari iss zindagi ka boj main utha nahin sakta...

khud ka lahu cheerdia maine uske liye par uski nazron main gira ka gira hua hi rehgaya hoon,
ae rabb chahe toh mujhe duniye se ruksat karde par usse main bewaffai ki saza de nahin sakta...

bheega karta tha main ansuon ki barsaat main,
ab toh kuch aisa haal kardia usne ke apne mare hue dil ko main dafna bhi nahin sakta...
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2008, 08:56:41 PM »
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bahut hi khoob kaha DH.

Dil ka dard saaf nazar aa raha hai
Pyar karna koi sab koh sikha raha hai


Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2008, 08:59:51 PM »
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Bahoot khoob DH JI
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2008, 09:02:31 PM »
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bahaut shukriya aur haan apke shaer ne kuch ajeeb hi kehdia...bahaut badi baat kehgaye aap...

jisne khud pyar ka matlab na samjha woh dusron ko kya sikhaega,
jiska makan khud ghir gaya ho woh dusron ka kya banaega...

bahaut shukriya pooja jee
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2008, 09:10:35 PM »
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SONEY KOH PIGLA KAR HI
SONA BANAYA JATA HAI
PYAR MEH THOKAR KHA KEY HI
PYAR SAMJAYA JATA HAI

TERE PYAR KEY JASBEY NEY
YEH SIKHLA DIA HAI
PYAR KARNA KOI TUJZEY SIKHEY
YEH SAMJA DIA HAI


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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2008, 09:26:57 PM »
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wah wah wah wah...kya baat hai...

jo pyar ka matlab samaj jaye woh dil se shikwa kis baat ka,
ap jaisa shayar jab lavzon main bewaffai ko bayan kare toh humare dafan dil ka rona kis kaam ka...
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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2008, 08:45:49 AM »
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nice work DH and goog work jasbire
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2008, 09:05:43 AM »
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Nice work Deadheart and Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2008, 08:34:39 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 24, 2008, 08:45:49 AM
nice work DH and goog work jasbire

Thanks Rajesh

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2008, 08:35:35 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 24, 2008, 09:05:43 AM
Nice work Deadheart and Jasbir Ji
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 24, 2008, 08:45:49 AM
nice work DH and goog work jasbire


Thanks Ghayel


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«Reply #10 on: January 02, 2009, 07:07:32 PM »
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thanks everyone
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«Reply #11 on: January 02, 2009, 10:22:54 PM »
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Nice One Dead Heart JI,.
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«Reply #12 on: January 03, 2009, 02:14:36 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on December 23, 2008, 08:51:10 PM
iss bewaffaon se bhari duniya main; main jee nahin sakta,
marjaunga pyaase magar ek bewaffa ke diye ansu main pee nahin sakta...
 
ab adhuri nazar ati hai mujhe meri parchai bhi,
ghumon se bhari iss zindagi ka boj main utha nahin sakta...

khud ka lahu cheerdia maine uske liye par uski nazron main gira ka gira hua hi rehgaya hoon,
ae rabb chahe toh mujhe duniye se ruksat karde par usse main bewaffai ki saza de nahin sakta...

bheega karta tha main ansuon ki barsaat main,
ab toh kuch aisa haal kardia usne ke apne mare hue dil ko main dafna bhi nahin sakta...

bahut accha likha hai...

Jo di thi humne unhe apne pyar ki challa nishani
Dekh-dekh us nishani ko meri apni seene se lagate honge..

Jaise hum jaagte hai raat ber yaad kr unke pyar unke sitamon ko
Waise kwaab hamare bhi kabhi-kabhi unhe bhi jagate honge..
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«Reply #13 on: January 03, 2009, 02:23:26 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on January 03, 2009, 02:14:36 AM
bahut accha likha hai...

Jo di thi humne unhe apne pyar ki challa nishani
Dekh-dekh us nishani ko meri apni seene se lagate honge..

Jaise hum jaagte hai raat ber yaad kr unke pyar unke sitamon ko
Waise kwaab hamare bhi kabhi-kabhi unhe bhi jagate honge..



wah kya baat hai SONIA
wah,bahut khoob kaha SONIA

TUMHARI NISHANI DIL SEY LAGA KAR BAITHEY HAI
AAP KOH AATEY NAHI, ISSEY HI KHUDA BANAYE BAITHEY HAI

SAPNEY GAR HAMAREY HI SAJAYE AAP BHI BAITHEY HO
DOOR KU HO FIR, KU ITNA TADPAYE HAMEY BAITHEY HO

BAHAEH PASAREY HUM YAHA BAITHEY HAI
NAZREH GADAYEH INTEZAAR MEH BAITHEY HAI

DIL HI DIL MEH HUM SAMJAYI BAITHEY HAI
HAI UNHEY BHI PYAR, YUHI BANKAR HARJAYI WOH BAITHEY HAI



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«Reply #14 on: January 03, 2009, 02:44:41 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 03, 2009, 02:23:26 PM
wah kya baat hai SONIA
wah,bahut khoob kaha SONIA

TUMHARI NISHANI DIL SEY LAGA KAR BAITHEY HAI
AAP KOH AATEY NAHI, ISSEY HI KHUDA BANAYE BAITHEY HAI

SAPNEY GAR HAMAREY HI SAJAYE AAP BHI BAITHEY HO
DOOR KU HO FIR, KU ITNA TADPAYE HAMEY BAITHEY HO

BAHAEH PASAREY HUM YAHA BAITHEY HAI
NAZREH GADAYEH INTEZAAR MEH BAITHEY HAI

DIL HI DIL MEH HUM SAMJAYI BAITHEY HAI
HAI UNHEY BHI PYAR, YUHI BANKAR HARJAYI WOH BAITHEY HAI



JASBIR SINGH

Thanks Jas ji... and Nice creation ..
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