Naseeba

by salma786 on April 15, 2009, 10:39:06 AM

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salma786

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Jinko jagah di thi dil me,
Sartaj apna banaya tha,
Apni zindegi ke har panne ko,
Khuli kitab kar dikhaya tha,

Samajhti rahi khushnaseeb khudko,
Par badnaseebi ka alam hi chaya tha,
Jo yun ek anjaane ke sath maine,
Sapno ka ashiyaan sajaya tha,

Toot kar bikharna hi tha meri kismat me,
Tabhi naseeba ne ye khel rachaya tha,
Na talab hoti mohabbat ki humko,
Or usne mauka bhi na gawaya tha,

Jis zindegi se mujhe itni mohabbat thi,
Aaj usi se nafrat hogayi hai,
Aisa lagta hai mujh se akhir,
Mere Naseeba ki bagawat hogayi hai!!


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2009, 10:58:27 AM »

yeh waqt ki bbat hai....dont be frustated

nice composition........S786

KA


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salma786

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2009, 11:04:48 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 15, 2009, 10:58:27 AM

yeh waqt ki bbat hai....dont be frustated

nice composition........S786

KA

Well its nothing personal KA ji.... just a thought of pain... Thanks that u understood it n praised!


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deepika_divya

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2009, 11:06:09 AM »

wah waah salma kya baat hai . very nice lines


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salma786

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2009, 11:27:44 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 15, 2009, 11:06:09 AM

wah waah salma kya baat hai . very nice lines

Shukriya Sophi sis Usual Smile


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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2009, 11:47:04 AM »

Bohat Achceh Salma, Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Bohat achche,.


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salma786

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2009, 02:29:56 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 15, 2009, 11:47:04 AM

Bohat Achceh Salma, Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Bohat achche,.

Shukriya hausla afzayi ka Azeem ji!!


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madhuwesh

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2009, 10:28:39 PM »

bahoot khub salma ji,very very nice,


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angel4u

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2009, 02:48:58 AM »

Too good Salma...

Bahut achha likha hia aapne... keep writing dear...


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salma786

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2009, 07:35:53 AM »

Quote from: angel4u on April 16, 2009, 02:48:58 AM

Too good Salma...

Bahut achha likha hia aapne... keep writing dear...

shukriya apne mere thread pe comment kiya sis Usual Smile


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salma786

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2009, 07:36:58 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 15, 2009, 10:28:39 PM

bahoot khub salma ji,very very nice,

Shukriya Madhuwwesh ji!


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jannatjahan

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2009, 03:37:26 AM »

Nice lines Dear
Kuch kuch milta julta hai kisi ki zindagi se...
I really liked it...
Too Good


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salma786

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2009, 11:12:27 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on April 18, 2009, 03:37:26 AM

Nice lines Dear
Kuch kuch milta julta hai kisi ki zindagi se...
I really liked it...
Too Good

Thanks lot dear Usual Smile


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salma786

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Re: Naseeba

«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2009, 08:53:57 AM »

Dastur-e-Mohabbat apna kaam kar jayegi,
Kise pata tha hume yun badnaam kar jayegi,
Chahat to thi chaht se mil jaye apne,
Kise pata tha is koshish me,Zindegi maut me badal jayegi!