Nazar ke Rubaroo

by rajrishi on September 07, 2007, 12:41:12 PM
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Nazar ke rubaroo hote hi nazar churai tune,
 jo baat lab keh na sake aankhon se batai tune.

 Woh baat gairon se pata chali humko,
 Jo baat ab tak apno se chhupai tune.

 Mahal khawabon ka sajaya tha kabhi jo humne,
 apne hathon se aag us mein lagai tune.

 Jo tha gulsitan kabhi woh veerana bana,
 Dil ke har kone mein kabar banai tune.

 Khamosh huya 'Raj' us roj  ke baad,
 Nashe mann pe jo bizlian girai tune.
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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2007, 01:51:16 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Raj ji... bahoot acha likha hai apne.. yah lines to bahoot hi achi lagi:

Mahal khawabon ka sajaya tha kabhi jo humne,
apne hathon se aag us mein lagai tune.

Jo tha gulsitan kabhi woh veerana bana,
Dil ke har kone mein kabar banai tune.
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2007, 04:10:45 AM »
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Thanks Pooja ji, aapne saraha shukriya
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ALONE BAD
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2007, 11:28:42 AM »
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bahoot khuub Raj ji... bahoot aacha likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2007, 01:15:56 PM »
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Thanks Alone
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2007, 07:55:43 AM »
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Beautifully Written Rajrishi.... Very Nice One...
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2007, 11:54:59 AM »
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Shukriya Shikha ji
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