Ohh Yaad aane vale............Akhir kyon?

by neelgold on April 13, 2010, 12:34:22 AM
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Muskarti hui ankho main kyon ansoo bhar diye tune ?
Ohh yaad aane vale yeh kya kar diya tune
Oh yaad................
Hum to kabhi tanha ho ke b tanha nhi hote the
Par bhari mehifil main kyon tanha kar diya tune ?
Ohh yaad …...............

Haath nahi manga tha par saath to manga tha
Par humse haar rista tod kyon humiko door kar diya tune?
Oh yaad ..................

Jin raston pe saath chalte the hum aur tum
Un rastho ka rukh kyon kahi aur hi kar diya tune?
Oh yaad...................

socha tha manzil taak poonch hi jaynge saath chalte chalte
Par apni manzil se hi  humeko akhir kyon door kaar diya tune
Oh yaad...........
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 12:56:23 AM »
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Bahut dard bhari poem hai Neel ji. Wah bahot khoob likha hai. Keep writing.
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 01:05:07 AM »
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Arey wah Neel ji.Kamaal ke likhti hai aap.bahut dard aur apne dil ke ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likhi aapne.great work.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2010, 01:19:43 AM »
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Ab main aur kya kahu Neel... Riyaz ji ne aur Madhu ji ne hi sab keh diya... main to bas "Kamaal" kahunga... sach me kamaal likha hai... koshish karna aap apne likhe huye poems aur ghazal bachaane ka... ye khone ki cheez nahi hoti...  keep writing...

tumhaare in behte huye aasuon me naam to mera hi hai,
tumhaare in dard bhare tanhayion me naam to mera hi hai,
badnaam karte ho hume ye kehke ki saare ghum tumhe maine diye,
par tumhaare dil pe jo likha ek naam hai wo to mera hi hai,
jee rahi ho tum aaj par zindagi tumhaare naam to mera hi hai,

jo saath main tumhe de na saka wo saath tumhaare liye rakha tha,
jo baat main keh na saka wo baat dil me tumhaare liye rakha tha,
kaash tumne us din bhari mehfil me mera haath thaam liya hota,
aaj saari duniya me tum ye na kehti ki bewafa naam to mera hi hai,
jee rahi ho tum aaj par zindagi tumhaare naam to mera hi hai....
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2010, 03:11:50 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai          Neelgold ji........


Chalte chalte  beech raha pe kyun chod diya tune
oh yaad aane wale yeh kya kar diya tune

manzil tak dene ka saath ka wada kyun tod diya tune
oh yaad aane wale yeh kya kar diya tune

kya hui mujhse khata fir kyun mooh mod diya tune
oh yaad aane wale yeh kya kar diya tune

jaana hi tha door yun hi chale jaate kyun apni yaaden de diya tune
oh yaad aane wale yeh kya kar diya tune.......
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2010, 04:08:44 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Kapil ji and Cara ji.lovely lines.great creation icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2010, 06:05:33 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 13, 2010, 12:20:51 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah Neel jee...bahaut acha likha hai apne..

Dard wohi samah sakta jisse dard milta hai..
Khushion main jeene wale dard ke ansoo diya nahin karte...

Bahaut acha likha hai apne...

Very very very incredible additions by Kapil dost aur Cara jee...Bahaut khubsoorat.. Applause

 
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2010, 12:26:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

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Bahut hi khoob Kapil ji and Cara ji.lovely lines.great creation icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2010, 02:01:03 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2010, 09:27:04 PM »
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Thanx a lot Riyaz.........

Really Thnx...........
Quote from: riyaz106 on April 13, 2010, 12:56:23 AM
Bahut dard bhari poem hai Neel ji. Wah bahot khoob likha hai. Keep writing.
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«Reply #11 on: April 13, 2010, 09:29:23 PM »
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??My God Mahu ji Itni Tarif!!!!!!!!!!
 happy3 happy3 Usual Smile Usual Smile
Thnku!!!!!!!!!!
Hm Bhut Khush Hue ki app saab ko kaam pasand aah reha hai
Quote from: madhuwesh on April 13, 2010, 01:05:07 AM
Arey wah Neel ji.Kamaal ke likhti hai aap.bahut dard aur apne dil ke ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likhi aapne.great work.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #12 on: April 13, 2010, 09:35:57 PM »
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Kapil JI APp ka "KAMAL" jst SUpreb hai
MY GOD itni tarif  happy3 happy3 Usual Smile Usual Smile icon_smile

Itni bari barkem reply
OMG aab muze b dena pdga jawab iska ........

Meri ankhon main ansoo tumare hi the,
Par tum dekh hi na paye......
Mere hotho pe naam tumra hi tha
paar tum hi sun na paye..........
Log hamesha meri udasi ka karan pochte
Main Jikar tumra hi karti
paar voh samz hi na paye..........
Quote from: klaskar on April 13, 2010, 01:19:43 AM
Ab main aur kya kahu Neel... Riyaz ji ne aur Madhu ji ne hi sab keh diya... main to bas "Kamaal" kahunga... sach me kamaal likha hai... koshish karna aap apne likhe huye poems aur ghazal bachaane ka... ye khone ki cheez nahi hoti...  keep writing...

tumhaare in behte huye aasuon me naam to mera hi hai,
tumhaare in dard bhare tanhayion me naam to mera hi hai,
badnaam karte ho hume ye kehke ki saare ghum tumhe maine diye,
par tumhaare dil pe jo likha ek naam hai wo to mera hi hai,
jee rahi ho tum aaj par zindagi tumhaare naam to mera hi hai,

jo saath main tumhe de na saka wo saath tumhaare liye rakha tha,
jo baat main keh na saka wo baat dil me tumhaare liye rakha tha,
kaash tumne us din bhari mehfil me mera haath thaam liya hota,
aaj saari duniya me tum ye na kehti ki bewafa naam to mera hi hai,
jee rahi ho tum aaj par zindagi tumhaare naam to mera hi hai....
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«Reply #13 on: April 13, 2010, 09:40:40 PM »
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Thnx CARA ji ....
U r too Gud .....
App ki Tarif bi kamal ka reply hota hai

APp ke liye.....

Jana nahi tha door par door hote gaye
Chale the bus char hi kadam hi AUr fasle badte gaye
Quote from: cara on April 13, 2010, 03:11:50 AM
Wah kya baat hai          Neelgold ji........


Chalte chalte  beech raha pe kyun chod diya tune
oh yaad aane wale yeh kya kar diya tune

manzil tak dene ka saath ka wada kyun tod diya tune
oh yaad aane wale yeh kya kar diya tune

kya hui mujhse khata fir kyun mooh mod diya tune
oh yaad aane wale yeh kya kar diya tune

jaana hi tha door yun hi chale jaate kyun apni yaaden de diya tune
oh yaad aane wale yeh kya kar diya tune.......
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«Reply #14 on: April 13, 2010, 09:41:28 PM »
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Thanxxxxxxxxxx

I dont knoe ur name ..SO thnx once again
Quote from: thinkhattk on April 13, 2010, 06:05:33 AM
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