Ohh Yaad aane vale............Akhir kyon?

by neelgold on April 13, 2010, 12:34:22 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 13, 2010, 09:42:31 PM »
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Very vll said Rahim Ji .....

Apka bhut bhut shukriya ......

THnx a lot
Quote from: -Rahim- on April 13, 2010, 12:20:51 PM
Wah Wah Wah Neel jee...bahaut acha likha hai apne..

Dard wohi samah sakta jisse dard milta hai..
Khushion main jeene wale dard ke ansoo diya nahin karte...

Bahaut acha likha hai apne...

Very very very incredible additions by Kapil dost aur Cara jee...Bahaut khubsoorat.. Applause

 
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«Reply #16 on: April 13, 2010, 09:45:34 PM »
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Thnx Rayees..........
Quote from: rayees abdullah on April 13, 2010, 02:01:03 PM
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«Reply #17 on: April 13, 2010, 09:53:28 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 13, 2010, 12:20:51 PM
Wah Wah Wah Neel jee...bahaut acha likha hai apne..

Dard wohi samah sakta jisse dard milta hai..
Khushion main jeene wale dard ke ansoo diya nahin karte...

Bahaut acha likha hai apne...

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«Reply #18 on: April 13, 2010, 09:56:37 PM »
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Bahut pyaara likha hai aapne Neel... aapko mera jawab bhari bhadkam q laga...waise aapke kamal k liye shukriya ... kuch halka likhne ki koshish ki is baar...

band aankhon se tumhaare khwaab dekhta hoon main,
siley hothon se tumhaara naam pukaarta hoon main,
mere to dil k har dhadkan pe naam tumhaara hi hai,
jeewan k har pal me saath tumhaara dekhta hoon main...

Quote from: neelgold on April 13, 2010, 09:35:57 PM
Kapil JI APp ka "KAMAL" jst SUpreb hai
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OMG aab muze b dena pdga jawab iska ........

Meri ankhon main ansoo tumare hi the,
Par tum dekh hi na paye......
Mere hotho pe naam tumra hi tha
paar tum hi sun na paye..........
Log hamesha meri udasi ka karan pochte
Main Jikar tumra hi karti
paar voh samz hi na paye..........
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«Reply #19 on: April 14, 2010, 10:26:16 PM »
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Wah kapil ji kya baat hai !!!!!!!!!
Khoob kaha aap ne .....

Kwhabon main b tum ho Khyiolo main tum
Jidhar dekthi hoo udar tum hi Tum ho
Hume apna tum bana  na pyae  kabhi
Meri to haar darkan main b Tum hi Tum ho
Quote from: klaskar on April 13, 2010, 09:56:37 PM
Bahut pyaara likha hai aapne Neel... aapko mera jawab bhari bhadkam q laga...waise aapke kamal k liye shukriya ... kuch halka likhne ki koshish ki is baar...

band aankhon se tumhaare khwaab dekhta hoon main,
siley hothon se tumhaara naam pukaarta hoon main,
mere to dil k har dhadkan pe naam tumhaara hi hai,
jeewan k har pal me saath tumhaara dekhta hoon main...
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«Reply #20 on: April 14, 2010, 10:46:24 PM »
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Thanx Neel ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

chaha tha tumne mujhe fursat k lamho me,
ab waqt nahi tumhare paas mere liye,
rang faila rahe ho kisi aur k jeewan me,
aur kehti ho pyaar nahi hai mere liye...

Quote from: neelgold on April 14, 2010, 10:26:16 PM
Wah kapil ji kya baat hai !!!!!!!!!
Khoob kaha aap ne .....

Kwhabon main b tum ho Khyiolo main tum
Jidhar dekthi hoo udar tum hi Tum ho
Hume apna tum bana  na pyae  kabhi
Meri to haar darkan main b Tum hi Tum ho
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«Reply #21 on: April 15, 2010, 12:23:35 AM »
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Chate the to izhaar bi karte
Tum kuch bole kyon nahi kuch to baat karte
Hum to tumre intzar main hi bethe rhe
Ahh ke hume savikar to karte.......
Quote from: klaskar on April 14, 2010, 10:46:24 PM
Thanx Neel ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

chaha tha tumne mujhe fursat k lamho me,
ab waqt nahi tumhare paas mere liye,
rang faila rahe ho kisi aur k jeewan me,
aur kehti ho pyaar nahi hai mere liye...
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«Reply #22 on: April 15, 2010, 12:17:12 PM »
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Bahut achche Neel ji...

hothon se har baat nahi kehte hai hum,
par aankhon se kai baar humne kehna chaha,
aankhon se har waqt bayaan karte the hum,
tumne kabhi unhe padhna hi nahi chaha...


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Chate the to izhaar bi karte
Tum kuch bole kyon nahi kuch to baat karte
Hum to tumre intzar main hi bethe rhe
Ahh ke hume savikar to karte.......
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«Reply #23 on: April 16, 2010, 04:44:53 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 13, 2010, 12:34:22 AM
Muskarti hui ankho main kyon ansoo bhar diye tune ?
Ohh yaad aane vale yeh kya kar diya tune
Oh yaad................
Hum to kabhi tanha ho ke b tanha nhi hote the
Par bhari mehifil main kyon tanha kar diya tune ?
Ohh yaad …...............

Haath nahi manga tha par saath to manga tha
Par humse haar rista tod kyon humiko door kar diya tune?
Oh yaad ..................

Jin raston pe saath chalte the hum aur tum
Un rastho ka rukh kyon kahi aur hi kar diya tune?
Oh yaad...................

socha tha manzil taak poonch hi jaynge saath chalte chalte
Par apni manzil se hi  humeko akhir kyon door kaar diya tune
Oh yaad...........

Bahut khoob Neel Ji
Kamaal ki lekhni hai
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«Reply #24 on: April 16, 2010, 04:46:30 AM »
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Achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap ne Neel ke saath Kapil Ji
Keep it up
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«Reply #25 on: April 16, 2010, 02:47:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...agar Neel ji ka saath rahega to ye silsila chalta rahega...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 16, 2010, 04:46:30 AM
Achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap ne Neel ke saath Kapil Ji
Keep it up
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«Reply #26 on: April 16, 2010, 11:17:35 PM »
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Thanx Rajesh Ji aap b join kaar sakte hai ......

Voh kethe hai na ki
Dil behalane ke liye kambhaqt ek bahana chiye.....
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 16, 2010, 04:46:30 AM
Achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap ne Neel ke saath Kapil Ji
Keep it up
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«Reply #27 on: April 16, 2010, 11:24:08 PM »
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Haale dil Byan bi kya karte,
Kya kehte aur kya hum padte...
jab bi dekhna chaha tumri ankhon main
Dil  kahi aur , Aur hum kahi aur ja gir padte..
Itni Madhoshi thi tumari bation main
Ki unne sun ke dil main hazrion Fool khil padte...
Yeh to batian hai beete waqt ki
dil toota is kadar ki , uske tukde sambhale nahi sambhlte.....
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Bahut achche Neel ji...

hothon se har baat nahi kehte hai hum,
par aankhon se kai baar humne kehna chaha,
aankhon se har waqt bayaan karte the hum,
tumne kabhi unhe padhna hi nahi chaha...
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«Reply #28 on: April 16, 2010, 11:56:39 PM »
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WAAH NEEL JI...
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«Reply #29 on: April 17, 2010, 10:09:31 AM »
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bahut khoob Neel ji...

kaayar hain wo jo apne pyaar ka izhaar hi na kar paaye,
darte hain kahin unki dosti tinko me bikharke na reh jaaye,
chahenge har pal hamesha ki kisi ko unke pyaar ka ehsaas ho,
chaahe isi intzaar me unki poori zindagi nikal jaaye...

Quote from: neelgold on April 16, 2010, 11:24:08 PM
Haale dil Byan bi kya karte,
Kya kehte aur kya hum padte...
jab bi dekhna chaha tumri ankhon main
Dil  kahi aur , Aur hum kahi aur ja gir padte..
Itni Madhoshi thi tumari bation main
Ki unne sun ke dil main hazrion Fool khil padte...
Yeh to batian hai beete waqt ki
dil toota is kadar ki , uske tukde sambhale nahi sambhlte.....
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