Palat ke dekha na phir

by asma zehra on July 05, 2009, 09:41:52 AM
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Palt ke dekha na phir woh jaane waala
Aks le gaya sabhi aaine waala

Churaa ke laaye the sahar se haseen raaton ko
Neend le gayaa khwaab dikhaane waala

Mukammal hogi tasveer-e-wafaa kya
Tod gaya auzaar but banaane waala

Bekaraar hai kab se kushboo mahakne ko
Aaya na koi gul khilaane waala

Itna haasil to hua raahe talab mein
Aab-e-chaSHm de gaya dil jalaane waala



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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2009, 09:48:18 AM »
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MashaAllah..kya likha hai aapne asma ji...
Bohot khoob Clapping Smiley
Yun hi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2009, 09:48:40 AM »
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subhan allah , kya hi boob bayan kiya hai apne hale dil ko .. aur kya hi qoob tassavur kiya gaya hai .. 3rd ashar to nagina hai apke kalam .. wah bhai wah tareef karna to suraj diya dikhane ke barabar hoga asma saheba .. allah apke kalamo ko miyari izzath de sahi maine me app yoindia per kam hi likhti hain magar jub kabhi bhi likhti to bada hi lajwab likh deti ho .. allah apko khush rakhe .. hyderabad se maloom hote ho app !!


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«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2009, 09:56:12 AM »
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Beautiful creation Asma ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2009, 12:35:53 PM »
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bahut pyara likha hai aapne asma ji Applause Applause Applause
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