Pathar Ka phool

by tausifhbk on March 31, 2007, 10:17:00 PM

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tausifhbk

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Teri aashqi ne is dil ko awara banaa diya,
aasmaan ki hawa ko dhool bana diya,
teri khafa nazron ne,teri bewafi ne
Bahaar ke gulaab ko, pattjhar ka phool bana diya

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Pathar Ka phool

«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2007, 08:02:25 AM »

Nice Lines... Usual Smile

Good Effort... =D>


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Pathar Ka phool

«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2007, 08:43:22 AM »

Good effort ...


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Pathar Ka phool

«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2007, 09:12:12 AM »

Nice one...though i have read it before as well !!


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Pathar Ka phool

«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2007, 04:06:48 PM »

Please always mention if its not your own work. We should always give respect to hard work of every poet.


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Pathar Ka phool

«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2007, 07:16:10 PM »

very goood.keep it up.
sochti hoo hum on ko on ki wafa k kuch anam dy
jo khud lajawab hoie tu onhaie hussan k kya khatab dy


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Pathar Ka phool

«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2007, 12:41:51 PM »

Husn ko dekh kar har koi deewana ban jaata hai,
jis kisise pyaar karo vo bewafa ban jaata hai,
Hum to sirf yaad karte rehte hai unki bewafai ko,
Kyu ki uski bewafai me bhi hume koi tohfa nazar aata hai

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Pathar Ka phool

«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2007, 11:09:01 AM »

Rand rup ka shakar ho tum
hussan ka khud khawab ho tum
jo b ho bemasal ho tum
khuda ki kasam lajawab ho tum

sorry mary exams ho rahie tha is ly reply nhi ker saki


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Re: Pathar Ka phool

«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2007, 03:10:16 PM »

Quote from: "tausifhbk"

Teri aashqi ne is dil ko awara banaa diya,
aasmaan ki hawa ko dhool bana diya,
teri khafa nazron ne,teri bewafi ne
Bahaar ke gulaab ko, pattjhar ka phool bana diya

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hum wo nahi jo ishq kr isse apni bhool btate hai,
hum wo nahi jo chalti in hawayo ko bs sirf dhool btate hai
are jaan kr to dekho humse ki malam kaise lgate hai zkhmo pr
kyu ki hum to wo hai jo patthro se chott kha kr bhi,unpar phool ugaate hai