Patthar thi wo

by sanchit on January 17, 2011, 02:15:37 PM
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Patthar thi wo or humne use khuda ki murat samjha,
Bemurauwat nikli wo jise humne wafa ki murat samjha,
Toote hue kaanch ke tukde ko samajhte rahe aaina,
Rait ke dher ko talaab ka manjar samjha,
Hum samajhte rahe unhe pyar ki kitaab,
Hum samajhte rahe unhe pyar ki kitaab,
Chand alfaaj nikle tedhe medhe se,
Jise humne gajal ki surat samjha.....Huh???
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2011, 02:36:45 PM »
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Sanchit jee Aadaab!

Kafi intresting ashaar kahe hai aapne..
waah janab daad hazir hai..

Likhate rahiye..
Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2011, 02:56:58 PM »
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Quote from: sanchit on January 17, 2011, 02:15:37 PM

Patthar thi wo or humne use khuda ki murat samjha,
Bemurauwat nikli wo jise humne wafa ki murat samjha,
Toote hue kaanch ke tukde ko samajhte rahe aaina,
Rait ke dher ko talaab ka manjar samjha,
Hum samajhte rahe unhe pyar ki kitaab,
Hum samajhte rahe unhe pyar ki kitaab,
Chand alfaaj nikle tedhe medhe se,
Jise humne gajal ki surat samjha.....Huh???
waaaaaah kya tarnnum hai janab..shru se aakhir tak lajawab
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2011, 03:01:36 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne...last two lines bahut acchi lagi.... bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2011, 06:16:41 PM »
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WAH
Quote from: sanchit on January 17, 2011, 02:15:37 PM

Patthar thi wo or humne use khuda ki murat samjha,
Bemurauwat nikli wo jise humne wafa ki murat samjha,
Toote hue kaanch ke tukde ko samajhte rahe aaina,
Rait ke dher ko talaab ka manjar samjha,
Hum samajhte rahe unhe pyar ki kitaab,
Hum samajhte rahe unhe pyar ki kitaab,
Chand alfaaj nikle tedhe medhe se,
Jise humne gajal ki surat samjha.....Huh???
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2011, 05:59:04 AM »
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khub....


 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2011, 06:04:21 AM »
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nice lines

lafzon ko samjh lete woh mere dil se jo nikley they
na jaane kyun woh mere labon ko parhtey rahey
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2011, 05:33:51 PM »
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Nice Sanchit JI
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2014, 11:57:12 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 17, 2011, 02:36:45 PM
Sanchit jee Aadaab!

Kafi intresting ashaar kahe hai aapne..
waah janab daad hazir hai..

Likhate rahiye..
Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

bahut bahut shukriya parwaaj ji...
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2014, 11:58:37 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 17, 2011, 02:56:58 PM
waaaaaah kya tarnnum hai janab..shru se aakhir tak lajawab
bekarar ji sabse pehle to deri k liye maafi chahunga. .. nd shukriya is hausla afzaayi ka. ..
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2014, 11:59:40 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on January 17, 2011, 03:01:36 PM
bahut accha likha hai aapne...last two lines bahut acchi lagi.... bahut khoob
bahut bahut shukriya nikhaar ji... nd deri ke liye maafi chahunga aapse bhi..
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on January 17, 2011, 06:16:41 PM
WAH
manoj ji bahut shukriya. ..
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2014, 12:01:04 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on January 18, 2011, 05:59:04 AM
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shukriya manjum ji...
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2014, 12:10:27 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on January 18, 2011, 06:04:21 AM
nice lines

lafzon ko samjh lete woh mere dil se jo nikley they
na jaane kyun woh mere labon ko parhtey rahey

thanks saahil ji...
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«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2014, 12:11:02 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 18, 2011, 05:33:51 PM
Nice Sanchit JI
rishi ji thanks...
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