Phir Kadum Uth Na Paaye...ritesh

by Ritesh Modi on October 05, 2012, 07:13:55 AM
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Chup hum khade rahe, aankhon se aansu girte rahe,
Jab dekha neeche toh khoon ke katere, mitti mein milte rahe,

Soch nahi paye hum ki do lamho mein kya ho gaya,
Mutthi mein tha jahaan, abhi jaane kaha kho gaya,

Thame hue kadum phir uth na paye aaj tak,
Tootte rahe hum khade wahi subah se raat tak,

Phir raat bhi murjhai aur baadal bhi pada ro,
Lekin wo bewafa yaar mera, chain se raha tha so,

Ek arsa beeta uss baat ko lekin abh tak na samajh paaya hu,
Kya galti thi meri, es sawal ka jawab nahi dhoond paaya hu...
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2012, 07:26:04 AM »
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ye sirf shayari nahi ghazal hai ...bahut khub likha hai Ritesh ji...
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on October 05, 2012, 07:26:04 AM
ye sirf shayari nahi ghazal hai ...bahut khub likha hai Ritesh ji...
shukriya gaytri ji...
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JUST AWESOME CREATION RITESH BHAI.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2012, 08:24:10 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on October 05, 2012, 08:20:15 AM
JUST AWESOME CREATION RITESH BHAI.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya...Usual Smile
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on October 05, 2012, 08:24:10 AM
v.nice
thank you Sanjeev ji..
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2012, 09:58:52 AM »
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very nice Ritesh ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2012, 10:00:14 AM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on October 05, 2012, 09:58:52 AM
very nice Ritesh ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank you nishi ji....
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2012, 10:33:07 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2012, 10:34:02 AM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on October 05, 2012, 07:13:55 AM
Chup hum khade rahe, aankhon se aansu girte rahe,
Jab dekha neeche toh khoon ke katere, mitti mein milte rahe,

Soch nahi paye hum ki do lamho mein kya ho gaya,
Mutthi mein tha jahaan, abhi jaane kaha kho gaya,

Thame hue kadum phir uth na paye aaj tak,
Tootte rahe hum khade wahi subah se raat tak,

Phir raat bhi murjhai aur baadal bhi pada ro,
Lekin wo bewafa yaar mera, chain se raha tha so,

Ek arsa beeta uss baat ko lekin abh tak na samajh paaya hu,
Kya galti thi meri, es sawal ka jawab nahi dhoond paaya hu...
your poetry is very emotional.God bless you
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Quote from: sushilbansal on October 05, 2012, 10:33:07 AM
Applause Applause Applause
thank you...
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Quote from: sushilbansal on October 05, 2012, 10:34:02 AM
your poetry is very emotional.God bless you
god bless us all....
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