Phir Kadum Uth Na Paaye...ritesh

by Ritesh Modi on October 05, 2012, 07:13:55 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 05, 2012, 05:08:00 PM »
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waaaaaah bahut khoob.......
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«Reply #16 on: October 05, 2012, 05:35:46 PM »
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«Reply #17 on: October 05, 2012, 07:06:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause too good... simply awesome Ritesh ji... dard me doobi aapki ye daastaan dil ko bahut andar tak chhooo gayi.. really touching post.. bahut khoobsurati se aapne ehsaason ko bayaan kiya hai... beautiful....!!!
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«Reply #18 on: October 05, 2012, 07:07:39 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: October 05, 2012, 07:09:00 PM »
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«Reply #20 on: October 05, 2012, 07:10:03 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 05, 2012, 07:06:29 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause too good... simply awesome Ritesh ji... dard me doobi aapki ye daastaan dil ko bahut andar tak chhooo gayi.. really touching post.. bahut khoobsurati se aapne ehsaason ko bayaan kiya hai... beautiful....!!!
thank you janaab aap ki tareef ke liye...shukriya
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«Reply #21 on: October 06, 2012, 05:10:33 AM »
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«Reply #22 on: October 06, 2012, 08:47:42 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:aap ka profil dekhney nikley thai kud kho gaey khoob rachan rachtey hai ap. Mubarik
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on October 05, 2012, 07:13:55 AM
Chup hum khade rahe, aankhon se aansu girte rahe,
Jab dekha neeche toh khoon ke katere, mitti mein milte rahe,

Soch nahi paye hum ki do lamho mein kya ho gaya,
Mutthi mein tha jahaan, abhi jaane kaha kho gaya,

Thame hue kadum phir uth na paye aaj tak,
Tootte rahe hum khade wahi subah se raat tak,

Phir raat bhi murjhai aur baadal bhi pada ro,
Lekin wo bewafa yaar mera, chain se raha tha so,

Ek arsa beeta uss baat ko lekin abh tak na samajh paaya hu,
Kya galti thi meri, es sawal ka jawab nahi dhoond paaya hu...
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«Reply #23 on: October 06, 2012, 12:51:06 PM »
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bohat khoob........
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«Reply #24 on: October 06, 2012, 06:07:17 PM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on October 05, 2012, 07:13:55 AM
Chup hum khade rahe, aankhon se aansu girte rahe,
Jab dekha neeche toh khoon ke katere, mitti mein milte rahe,

Soch nahi paye hum ki do lamho mein kya ho gaya,
Mutthi mein tha jahaan, abhi jaane kaha kho gaya,

Thame hue kadum phir uth na paye aaj tak,
Tootte rahe hum khade wahi subah se raat tak,

Phir raat bhi murjhai aur baadal bhi pada ro,
Lekin wo bewafa yaar mera, chain se raha tha so,

Ek arsa beeta uss baat ko lekin abh tak na samajh paaya hu,
Kya galti thi meri, es sawal ka jawab nahi dhoond paaya hu...

Wahhhh waah ritesh jee bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: October 08, 2012, 02:11:42 PM »
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«Reply #26 on: November 05, 2012, 10:47:46 AM »
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Shukriya aap ka....
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bohat khoob........
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