phir???

by aryan_mantri on January 15, 2008, 07:16:54 AM
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YE DARD MIT GAYA TO PHIR?
YE ZAKHM SIL GAYA TO PHIR?
BICHHAD KAR SOCHTA HOON MAIN,
WO PHIR SE MIL GAYA TO PHIR?
MAIN TITLIYON KE SHEHAR MEIN,
RAHOON TO MUJH KO FIKAR HAI
WO PHOOL JO KHILA NAHI,
WO PHOOL KHIL GAYA TO PHIR?
TUJHE BHI KUCH NAHI MILA,
MUJHE BHI KUCH NAHI MILA
TAMAM UMAR KE LIYE,
YE DARD MIL GAYA TO PHIR?
MAIN IS LIYE TO AAJ TAK,
SAWAL BHI NA KAR SAKA
AGAR MERE SAWAL KA,
JAWAB MIL GAYA TO PHIR?
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2008, 01:53:48 PM »
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Aryan

Bahut umda likha hai aap ne !

The ending was very powerful !

Good job !
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2008, 02:43:40 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai... bahoot hi simple words mai bahoot gahra aor payara likha hai!!! Good Job aryan_mantri !!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2008, 05:40:38 PM »
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Kuch bhi to mila nahi
Dard yah silla nahi
Chain ek pal ko mila nahi
Neer kabhi thuma nahi

Ajj bhi hai tu soch main
Dar-o-gum ke hosh main
Tadap ke dil bulata hai
Ek hi sawal dohrata hai

Najar kyun tu mujhse milata nahi
Jawab kyun tu de pata nahi
Kaya tere dil ko chain hai
Kaya tere dil ko chain hai?

Kuch bhi to mila nahi………

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2009, 08:20:39 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aryan ji and Pooja ji mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2009, 08:35:33 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Poojaji kuchh mil jaata tou PHIR Huh?
AUR KOI KEH DETA KI CHAIN MIL GAYA TOU PHIR !!!

CHAH AUR KI BADHTI JAATI PHIR
PUCHHTE AUR KYA MILA PHIR PHIR
KYA PRASHN THAM JAATE PHIR ?
KYA UTHTA NAHI SAWAL KOI PHIR ?


Kuch bhi to mila nahi
Dard yah silla nahi
Chain ek pal ko mila nahi
Neer kabhi thuma nahi

Ajj bhi hai tu soch main
Dar-o-gum ke hosh main
Tadap ke dil bulata hai
Ek hi sawal dohrata hai

Najar kyun tu mujhse milata nahi
Jawab kyun tu de pata nahi
Kaya tere dil ko chain hai
Kaya tere dil ko chain hai?

Kuch bhi to mila nahi………


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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2009, 08:39:11 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji ,beautiful lines. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2009, 09:10:36 AM »
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wah wah wah bahut hi khoob aryan ji.. wah wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2009, 09:11:12 AM »
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wah pooja ji, wah bahut khoob

jasbir singh
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2009, 09:11:41 AM »
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wah sam ji, aap ney bhi bahut hi khoob kaha

jasbir singh
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smardia
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2009, 02:21:05 PM »
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THANK YOU Maddhuji......

Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji ,beautiful lines. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2009, 02:44:59 PM »
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YE DARD MIT GAYA TO PHIR?
YE ZAKHM SIL GAYA TO PHIR?
BICHHAD KAR SOCHTA HOON MAIN,
WO PHIR SE MIL GAYA TO PHIR?
MAIN TITLIYON KE SHEHAR MEIN,
RAHOON TO MUJH KO FIKAR HAI
WO PHOOL JO KHILA NAHI,
WO PHOOL KHIL GAYA TO PHIR?
TUJHE BHI KUCH NAHI MILA,
MUJHE BHI KUCH NAHI MILA
TAMAM UMAR KE LIYE,
YE DARD MIL GAYA TO PHIR?
MAIN IS LIYE TO AAJ TAK,
SAWAL BHI NA KAR SAKA
AGAR MERE SAWAL KA,
JAWAB MIL GAYA TO PHIR?

Very well written Aryan Ji... Usual Smile
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