Phir teri yaad aane lagi, A falling tear Muzammil

by Muzammil, on October 11, 2010, 05:29:39 AM
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(Today Im missing my love so much,aaj mujhe mere pyar ki bohot yaad aarahi hai,main nahi jaanta ke kaise mai apne aap ko sambhaalu,)Dil ne jo chaaha main wo likhne ki koshih kiya,mujhe shayri bohot pasandh hai lekin mai shayer nahi,)



Itna kyun tadpaane lagi,
Phir teri yaad mujhe aane lagi,

Behne lage aansu bhi mere aaj yunhi,
Chup reh rehkar khamoshi bhi yu sataane lagi,

Tum jo roothe rishte sab toote,
Muskuraahat bhi aaj hame rulaane lagi,

Shaam kheenchne lagi din ko apni taraf,
Ujaalo ko raat dheere se phir bhulaane lagi,

Phir aankhe hogayi num hamari,
Phir dhadkane tumhari kahaani sunane lagi,

Neend kaha hai teri muhabbat me abto,
Khwaab me tujhe dekhne ki umeed mujhe sulaane lagi,

K dil me tere mera hi intezar hai aakhir,
Teri masoom aankhe mujhe bataane lagi,

Jab bhi jalaayi muhabbat ki shama iss dil me humne,
Aksar waqt ki hawaaa use ayese hi bujhaane lagi,

Guzar gayee raat,dhal gaya din,hogayi shaam,
Phir teri yaad mujhe aane lagi,

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               A Falling Tear Muzammil
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2010, 07:38:22 AM »
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wah muzammil bhai kya khoob likha h aapne isi tarah likhte rahiye dil ko chhone wale ashaar
               
             Mohabbat naam h us shey ka
             jisme har soo tuhi nazar aane lagi
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2010, 08:09:51 AM »
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pyaar aur dard se bhari ye peshkash mujhe bht achchi lagi muzammil ji...yunhi likhte rahiye...bht hi pyara likha haia apne...
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2010, 08:58:03 AM »
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muzammil sahab bahut badhiya likha he ..~
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2010, 09:21:36 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob muzammil ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2010, 01:26:59 PM »
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Maine dard pe kayi nazmein parri hai aur likhi bhi hai..Muzammil jee mager apki yeh nazm mujhe sabse khaas lagi..bahaut khubsoorat expressions use kiye hai apne..
Bahaut khoob..
Dil ki baat likh di apne.. tearyeyed tearyeyed
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2010, 04:11:22 AM »
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Shukriya Dosto,Mujhe samajhne ke liye,
mai bohot shukr guzaar hu aap sab ka,,
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2010, 06:58:33 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne sarkaar....!!!
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