Prashan

by thycreator on January 09, 2005, 02:45:48 PM
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Ranjo gham ki shyahiyon se dur hal pal hum rahe,
Phir kyu bhala dil ko mere, chot di usne?
Humne nahi mangi thi uss se pyar ki saugat bhi,
Phir kyu bhala iss dil pe ye julm kiya usne?
Julm kiya toh kiya, sah bhi lete hum usse bade naaz se,
Dil todne ka haq uss se magar diya kisne?
Uspe bhi hum chup rahe, shikwa na shikayat koi,
Saza bhi li uski, jo kabhi na kiya humne.
Par ab toh aalam ye hai ki wo yadon mein bhi aane laga,
Pehle dil, phir jism aur ab ruh lagi pisne.
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2005, 04:48:27 PM »
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"Julm kiya toh kiya, sah bhi lete hum usse bade naaz se,
Dil todne ka haq uss se magar diya kisne?
Uspe bhi hum chup rahe, shikwa na shikayat koi,
Saza bhi li uski, jo kabhi na kiya humne. "


yeh lines apki bohot pasand ayi mujhe! superbbbb!
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2005, 05:13:52 PM »
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Kitni bar thanx kahu apko

    Shukriya nazar karu jo apko toh kitni bar,
    Apne mujhe iss labz ka kayal bana diya.
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2005, 05:16:11 PM »
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lol  :lol:

mat shukriya adat kar mera ek naghme ke liye,
maine to "wah wah" ki hai tere zakhmo ke liye!
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2005, 05:47:31 PM »
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Chaliye hamare zakhm kissi ke kam toh aaye,
     Apki wah wah ne inhe phir se hara kar diya.
     
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2005, 06:03:03 PM »
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wah!!!!

zakhm samne to tabhi to hum unhe dekh sakhte hai,
dard samne ho tabhi to hum marham laga sakhte hai!
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2005, 06:12:49 PM »
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Jo zakhm samne ho unko marham ki hai kya garaz,
     Zkhame dil dekh sake wo aankhen le aaiye zara.
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2005, 06:23:11 PM »
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wahhhhh!

zakhm di lke dekhne ke liye ankhon ki nahin
par ek toote hue dil ki zaroorat hoti hai,
marham lagane ke liye kisi waid (doctor) ki nahin
par ek dost ki dua ki zaroorat hoti hai!
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wah
«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2005, 06:25:53 PM »
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Mana apki iss bat ko maine bhi hai aye dost,
     Yuhi nahi tabse lage hue hai apke peeche.;-)
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2005, 06:46:56 PM »
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lolllllllllllllllll  :lol:

dua karti hoon mai har ek dost ke liye,
ke woh kabhi na tadpe kushi ke liye,
chandni raaton me chand ka sukoon le,
aur dil ki hasi de har subha ke swagat ke liye!
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2005, 07:08:15 PM »
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Beautiful lines Both of u!

jaane kyun har ghadi uska intezaar rehta hai
jaane kyun.. hamari soch mein uska khayal rehta hai Puzzled !

chal ok. bye everyone! time for sweet dreams  :wink:
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«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2005, 04:08:19 AM »
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Itni na dua do hame, aadat nahi hame iski,
    Hum toh wo seh hai jise reuswaiyon na pala hai.
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«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2005, 03:36:30 PM »
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Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
Beautiful lines Both of you!

jaane kyun har ghadi uska intezaar rehta hai
jaane kyun.. hamari soch mein uska khayal rehta hai Puzzled !

chal ok. bye everyone! time for sweet dreams  :wink:


thanx!  :D
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2005, 03:38:56 PM »
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Itni na dua do hame, aadat nahi hame iski,
    Hum toh wo seh hai jise reuswaiyon na pala hai.


duaon me chupa hai apno ka pyar,
duaye to dengi tumko karar,
chupi hai Khuda ki tasweer har ek dua hai,
chahe to dekh le tu dil se ek bar!

 :D
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«Reply #14 on: January 10, 2005, 04:20:53 PM »
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Kya hai meena ji

     Kabhi apna kaha hota jo agar apne mujhe,
     apki dua kya sitam bhi mere sar aankon pe hote
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