Raaz ki baatain likhi aur khat khula rehnay diya............

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«Reply #15 on: April 09, 2005, 08:24:39 PM »
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bahoot khoob waheed

arifa ji ver nice...

arey oh taklo ji tumney batya nahi key tumhari koi sis bhi hia jo yea per ati hai icon_scratch badey cupey rustam nekley tum to bhen bahi etna acha likhtey hai to baki keya kertey hungey laughing4laughing4...

raaj ki batey likhi or khat khula rehney deya,
gumo ki batey thi mager khushiow ka namo nishan na tha,
umer bhar sath to tha meyrey mager vo naa jan saka meyrey dil ki baat,
umer ka takaja na tha pyar ka janaza na tha,
do dilo key beach mey koi fasla na tha,
hum they sath mager doriyow ka takaja na tha,
do kadaem vo chaley do kadam hum chaley mager umger bhar sath chalney ka erada kesi ka na tha,
meyney socha tha pyar ki khushiya deygi mujhey
mager mujhey keya peta tha meyri ahkho mey nami deygi,
khat khula tha mager pen mey sehayee na thi,
dil ki jo baat adhuri thi vo ahkho ney beyan kerdi,
jo meyhphil saji thi teyreynam kee ab vo phiki padi hia,
khat to khula hia mager pen mey shayee khatam hia.


hahahaha.........sonu........tumne  kabhi  poocha  nahin  mujhse  .....arifa  poore  yoindia  ki  sis  hai......tumhari  bhi  hai ......motiiiiiiiiiii...:lol: tongue3

very  nice  sonu..................bahot  khoob............:lol:
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«Reply #16 on: April 11, 2005, 09:50:49 PM »
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haso nahi samjhye na nahi to mey tumharey daat tud dungi moteyyyyyyyyy acha to eysey bolo na key vo jagat sister hai ab mujhey thuda na peta tha or veysye bhi mey to ahyee nahi thi etney din yea per to tumhey to batna chaya tha na key kes kes ko apny apna risteydar banaya hia:))laughing4laughing4.
jhaler valey ser ko dhak ker ahya kro.


Usual Smile thanks ( u r welcome) shukirya jnaab Usual Smile urf takloo ji:))laughing4
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«Reply #17 on: April 14, 2005, 02:34:03 PM »
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lolzzzzzz  sonu  tumne  poocha  hi  nahin :wink: daant  mat  todna plz........:oops:

kya  hua  itne  dino  mein  kaise  batayen hum
meri jindagi ka sab kuch lut gaya kya kya batayen hum
ab  kuch nahin  bacha  hai jo main  tujhe  dikha sakoon ai "Sonu"
apne  jindagi ko  khaak  mein  mita  daale hum.....

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«Reply #18 on: April 16, 2005, 05:52:06 AM »
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arey tkalo keo juth boltey ho meyney pcuha to tha key yoindia mey koi new fird baney key anhi to tumahra koi reply nahi ahya tha anyway thik hai bacha hum tumahrey daat nahi todeyngey veysye bhi abhi tumahrey dhood key dath kha tutey hungey bekar mey jindgi bhar rotey rahogye key sonu ney meyrey dhood key dath tod deya hai laughing4

... arey taklo keo keya huya phir sey koi pyar mey dhukha dey gayee keya beychara waheed payr key gum ka mra esey chai ahia kesi ladki ka sahra jo eskey payr ko samjh sakey or ager vaqt aey to ser per 2 kas ker juthey bhi mar sakey laughing4laughing4
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«Reply #19 on: April 16, 2005, 07:34:55 AM »
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wah waheed,arifa and sonu to simply gr8 yaar,no words 2 express,u write wonderful.
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«Reply #20 on: April 16, 2005, 08:04:14 AM »
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nidhi ji shukirya...

::::::yea to bus dosto key deykhney or padney ka naziya hai.
key sahiry likhney valey ko sahir khey deytey hai,
jo kesi payr key gum ka mara hoo vo to apni khani shairy mey khey jata hai,
mager khani ko padney vala tali bejha ker chala jata hai.::::::
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«Reply #21 on: April 16, 2005, 08:16:34 AM »
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nidhi ji shukirya...

::::::yea to bus dosto key deykhney or padney ka naziya hai.
key sahiry likhney valey ko sahir khey deytey hai,
jo kesi payr key gum ka mara hoo vo to apni khani shairy mey khey jata hai,
mager khani ko padney vala tali bejha ker chala jata hai.::::::
hmm...sahi kaha aapne.

"Dil toote jiska wohi jane har ek baat ka matlab,
 pyar me doobe jo wohi jane samandar aur sahil,
 dost wo zariyan hain jo hamein samajhte hain,
 jaante hain ham toote hain,lekin apni koshishon se baaz na aate hain."
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«Reply #22 on: April 17, 2005, 02:27:48 AM »
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shukirya nidhi ji...
bahoot khoob nidhi...

dil tota ho jiska vo oru ko her baat ka matlab samjha pata nahi,
pyar key gum mey jo doobha ho voo  samandar or sahil ko janey nahi,
kuch loog hia jo humey apna dost khey jatey hai,
mager humey unper bhi ehtbar nahi,
jantey hai hum tootey hia leykin humey kesi sey gila bhi nahi.
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«Reply #23 on: April 17, 2005, 03:53:59 AM »
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buhat achey nidhi pandey..........................................


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nidhi ji shukirya...

::::::yea to bus dosto key deykhney or padney ka naziya hai.
key sahiry likhney valey ko sahir khey deytey hai,
jo kesi payr key gum ka mara hoo vo to apni khani shairy mey khey jata hai,
mager khani ko padney vala tali bejha ker chala jata hai.::::::
hmm...sahi kaha aapne.

"Dil toote jiska wohi jane har ek baat ka matlab,
 pyar me doobe jo wohi jane samandar aur sahil,
 dost wo zariyan hain jo hamein samajhte hain,
 jaante hain ham toote hain,lekin apni koshishon se baaz na aate hain."
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«Reply #24 on: April 17, 2005, 07:17:04 AM »
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""MERA CHIRAG BUJAKAR HI HAWAON KO RONA THA,
YE SARA MANJIR MERE SHEHAR MAIN HONA THA,
MANN CHAHTA ISHQ MAIN NAYI CHOT KHANI,JO AAPNE TODA,WO MERA DIL THA NAHI KHILAONA THA
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«Reply #25 on: April 17, 2005, 01:10:41 PM »
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wonderful reply sonu,thanx naveed.Nice one mann.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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«Reply #26 on: April 18, 2005, 04:25:43 AM »
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....shukriya nidhi...


....mann ji very nice...
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«Reply #27 on: April 18, 2005, 09:41:12 AM »
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jaante hain ham toote hain,lekin apni koshishon se baaz na aate hain
kia krein aba tu humein har pal hansne ki addat jo hog i hai !!!!!!!!!

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wonderful reply sonu,thanx naveed.Nice one mann.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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«Reply #28 on: April 18, 2005, 02:21:25 PM »
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jaante hain ham toote hain,lekin apni koshishon se baaz na aate hain
kia krein aba tu humein har pal hansne ki addat jo hog i hai !!!!!!!!!

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wonderful reply sonu,thanx naveed.Nice one mann.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
lol......naveed,good.
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«Reply #29 on: April 18, 2005, 04:42:38 PM »
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nidhi ji shukirya...

::::::yea to bus dosto key deykhney or padney ka naziya hai.
key sahiry likhney valey ko sahir khey deytey hai,
jo kesi payr key gum ka mara hoo vo to apni khani shairy mey khey jata hai,
mager khani ko padney vala tali bejha ker chala jata hai.::::::
hmm...sahi kaha aapne.

"Dil toote jiska wohi jane har ek baat ka matlab,
 pyar me doobe jo wohi jane samandar aur sahil,
 dost wo zariyan hain jo hamein samajhte hain,
 jaante hain ham toote hain,lekin apni koshishon se baaz na aate hain."


wow  wonderful..........sonu....nidhi..............ver y  nice......MANN MARJANA
....naveed,...........nice  work.....nidhi  aur  sonu......dono  ne  true  words kahe  hain.........


Ab Dil Mein Woh Mehakte Hue Jazbe Nahi Milte
Ujhrey Huey Gulshan Mey Parinday Nahi Milte

Kyun Chupkey Sey Woh Log Utar Jatey Hain Dil Mein
Jin Logon Se Qismat Ke Sitare Nahi Milte

Aghraaz Key Bandoun Sey Na Ikhalass Talab Ker
Sehra Mey Ghanay Peroun Key Sayey Nahi Milte

Ju Zakham Dey Iss Sey Ganimat Hai Key Arif
Har Shakhs Ko Yeh Qeemati Tohfay Nahi Milte.............................nm!!!
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