Rab se shikayat!

by salma786 on February 10, 2009, 07:21:51 AM
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Mund kar ankh chala karte the,
Sath unke hum door talak,
Chand ka bhi noor nazar ata tha,
Unki ankho me kya zameen kya falak!

Jo mudkar dekha koi nahi tha,
Na wo chand, na uski koi jhalak,
Na karti shikwa apne "Rab" se,
To rehti andhere me kab talak?
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2009, 07:33:26 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 10, 2009, 07:21:51 AM
Mund kar ankh chala karte the,
Sath unke hum door talak,
Chand ka bhi noor nazar ata tha,
Unki ankho me kya zameen kya falak!

Jo mudkar dekha koi nahi tha,
Na wo chand, na uski koi jhalak,
Na karti shikwa apne "Rab" se,
To rehti andhere me kab talak?


wah wah bahut khoob likha dear Salma
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2009, 07:37:51 AM »
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Nice One Salma Ji,.
Magaryaar Rab se Kabhi Bjhi Shikayat Nahi karni Chahiye, Kyunki Rab Jo Bhi Karte hain, Usme Hamaari Hi Bhalaai Hoti Hai,.
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2009, 10:45:21 AM »
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Thanx roja.....[Usual Smile]
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2009, 10:46:07 AM »
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Oh!!!!!!!
Thank you Janasheen ji!
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2009, 10:57:00 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 10, 2009, 07:21:51 AM
Mund kar ankh chala karte the,
Sath unke hum door talak,
Chand ka bhi noor nazar ata tha,
Unki ankho me kya zameen kya falak!

Jo mudkar dekha koi nahi tha,
Na wo chand, na uski koi jhalak,
Na karti shikwa apne "Rab" se,
To rehti andhere me kab talak?


Nice one Salma Ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2009, 11:05:10 AM »
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Thanks celmira ji!
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2009, 06:57:53 PM »
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nice one Salma jee...

koi rabb se shikayat kar raha hai,
toh koi udhar rabb ko puch raha hai,
koi rabb se khushion ki bheek mang raha hai,
toh koi rabb se marne ki dua kar raha hai,
ae duniya walon pehchano uss rabb ki achai ko;yehi kehte rehgaya Rahim,
par aaj bhi yahi mehsus karta hoon ke mujhe koi nahin samaj raha hai...
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2009, 06:16:39 AM »
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Thanks Heart ji n nice one frm ur side !
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2009, 06:25:16 AM »
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Thanks heart ji
APne bhi acha likha hai!
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2009, 04:28:58 PM »
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Shukriya Salma jee
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2009, 04:31:07 PM »
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  Ya Rab Tujhse To Koi Shikaayat Nahi,.
Kyun Use Mera Banaaya Jise Mujhse Mohabbat Nahi,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2009, 04:56:12 PM »
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ae dost rabb ne jo tere saath kia usse apnana sikhle,
nahin mili woh jisse mohobat thi toh ab isse mohobat karna sikhle...

khush naseeb hai tu ke hai tere pas jutha hi sahi magar ek dildar,
ek dafan dil ki baat mann aur jo hai usme hi khush rehna sikhle...
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2009, 05:07:46 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 11, 2009, 04:56:12 PM
ae dost rabb ne jo tere saath kia usse apnana sikhle,
nahin mili woh jisse mohobat thi toh ab isse mohobat karna sikhle...

khush naseeb hai tu ke hai tere pas jutha hi sahi magar ek dildar,
ek dafan dil ki baat mann aur jo hai usme hi khush rehna sikhle...

Nice One Rahim Bhai,.
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2009, 05:09:50 PM »
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Shukriya...aap bhi kuch likh dete jawab main toh mehfil agey badti..
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