Rab se shikayat!

by salma786 on February 10, 2009, 07:21:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 11, 2009, 05:23:53 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 11, 2009, 05:09:50 PM
Shukriya...aap bhi kuch likh dete jawab main toh mehfil agey badti..

Ek Koshish Karte Hain, Galti Dikhaai De To Maaf Karna,.


Wo Bewafaa Nahi Tha "Azeem,.
Rab Ne Shayad Use Tere Liya Banaaya Nahi Tha,.
Tujhe Bhi Kuch To Haasil Hua Uske Zariye,.
Ek Arse Se Tune Bhi Koi Dhoka Khaaya Nahi Tha,.

Ab Nikaal Le Aansuon Ko Aankhon Se "Nadaan,.
Kayi Dino Se Tune Inhe Bahaaya Nahi Tha,.

Kyun Kiya Tune Uspe Itna Aitbaar "Azeem,.
Uska To Khel Tha Pyaar Usne Kisiko Chaaha Nahi Tha,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #16 on: February 12, 2009, 06:56:02 AM »
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Rab se shikayat bhi buri hoti hai,
Sabki neend udi hoti hai,
Ishq ka naam mere humraaz,
bewafaai se judi hota hai!
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«Reply #17 on: February 12, 2009, 07:08:58 AM »
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Khudpe hardam sitam hum dhate rahe,
Apni khamosh nigaho se unhe chahte rahe,
Hum nadaan the unki khamoshi hi na samjhe,
Jo Ishq k bahane jhute khwab dikhate rahe!

Anjaan the hum ishq k anjaam se,
Unki ek jhalak pe hum jaan lutate rahe,
Khwahish thi Jeene ki Ishq me jinke,
Ab unke naam ko apni khoon se mitate rahe!
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«Reply #18 on: February 12, 2009, 07:09:40 AM »
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Very nice janasheen ji!
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«Reply #19 on: February 13, 2009, 05:29:53 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 11, 2009, 05:23:53 PM
Ek Koshish Karte Hain, Galti Dikhaai De To Maaf Karna,.


Wo Bewafaa Nahi Tha "Azeem,.
Rab Ne Shayad Use Tere Liya Banaaya Nahi Tha,.
Tujhe Bhi Kuch To Haasil Hua Uske Zariye,.
Ek Arse Se Tune Bhi Koi Dhoka Khaaya Nahi Tha,.

Ab Nikaal Le Aansuon Ko Aankhon Se "Nadaan,.
Kayi Dino Se Tune Inhe Bahaaya Nahi Tha,.

Kyun Kiya Tune Uspe Itna Aitbaar "Azeem,.
Uska To Khel Tha Pyaar Usne Kisiko Chaaha Nahi Tha,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-


wah wah wah wah mere bhai...isme Rahim galtiyan kaise dhunde...maza agaya... Applause Applause
hum bhi jawab zarur likhenge...
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«Reply #20 on: February 13, 2009, 05:36:34 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 12, 2009, 06:56:02 AM
Rab se shikayat bhi buri hoti hai,
Sabki neend udi hoti hai,
Ishq ka naam mere humraaz,
bewafaai se judi hota hai!

Quote from: salma786 on February 12, 2009, 07:08:58 AM
Khudpe hardam sitam hum dhate rahe,
Apni khamosh nigaho se unhe chahte rahe,
Hum nadaan the unki khamoshi hi na samjhe,
Jo Ishq k bahane jhute khwab dikhate rahe!

Anjaan the hum ishq k anjaam se,
Unki ek jhalak pe hum jaan lutate rahe,
Khwahish thi Jeene ki Ishq me jinke,
Ab unke naam ko apni khoon se mitate rahe!

Applause Applause kamal ka likha hai apne Salma jee...maza agaya khas tor pe akhri do lines...touched a dead heart powerfully....well done and keep writing...
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«Reply #21 on: February 13, 2009, 06:05:38 AM »
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Shukriya heart ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: February 13, 2009, 07:04:54 PM »
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ur welcome Salma jee
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«Reply #23 on: February 13, 2009, 07:15:17 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 11, 2009, 05:23:53 PM
Ek Koshish Karte Hain, Galti Dikhaai De To Maaf Karna,.


Wo Bewafaa Nahi Tha "Azeem,.
Rab Ne Shayad Use Tere Liya Banaaya Nahi Tha,.
Tujhe Bhi Kuch To Haasil Hua Uske Zariye,.
Ek Arse Se Tune Bhi Koi Dhoka Khaaya Nahi Tha,.

Ab Nikaal Le Aansuon Ko Aankhon Se "Nadaan,.
Kayi Dino Se Tune Inhe Bahaaya Nahi Tha,.

Kyun Kiya Tune Uspe Itna Aitbaar "Azeem,.
Uska To Khel Tha Pyaar Usne Kisiko Chaaha Nahi Tha,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-


Once again i wuld say beautiful Azeem bhai... Applause Applause



mana ke woh mere naseeb main nahin tha,
par iska yeh matlab nahin ke woh bewaffa nahin tha,
toda hai usne mere dil ko pyaar tukdon main,
ab kaho doston kya woh guneghar nahin tha?

jab ansuon ka sahara tha hume toh usne unhe bhi chin lia,
ab kaho doston kya woh humara qarazdar nahin tha?

ab kis baat ki shikayat kar raha hai tu Rahim,
deke tujhe ek dafan dil;usse toh tere ghum ka ehsaas bhi nahin tha...
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«Reply #24 on: February 13, 2009, 07:25:46 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 13, 2009, 07:15:17 PM
Once again i wuld say beautiful Azeem bhai... Applause Applause



mana ke woh mere naseeb main nahin tha,
par iska yeh matlab nahin ke woh bewaffa nahin tha,
toda hai usne mere dil ko pyaar tukdon main,
ab kaho doston kya woh guneghar nahin tha?

jab ansuon ka sahara tha hume toh usne unhe bhi chin lia,
ab kaho doston kya woh humara qarazdar nahin tha?

ab kis baat ki shikayat kar raha hai tu Rahim,
deke tujhe ek dafan dil;usse toh tere ghum ka ehsaas bhi nahin tha...




WAH WAH WAH DH, VERY NICE

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #25 on: February 14, 2009, 04:08:18 AM »
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bahoot ache janasheen ji or Heart ji!!


Apni tanhaiyyo se akhir,
Rishta humne jod liya tha,
Unki yaado ko dafan karke,
Mohabbat se rishta tod diya tha,
Ab jeene ki chah ho hi rahi thi,
K kambhakt sanso ne hi sath chod diya tha!
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«Reply #26 on: February 14, 2009, 04:27:40 AM »
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nice one Salma ji
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«Reply #27 on: February 14, 2009, 04:30:27 AM »
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Shukriya nehak ji!
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«Reply #28 on: February 14, 2009, 05:01:30 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #29 on: February 15, 2009, 07:01:56 AM »
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Shukriya Jasbir jee aur Salma jee...
Salma jee apne bhi bahaut hi acha likha hai...
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