Rang e hina de gaye....premdeep

by premdeep on June 25, 2013, 06:11:10 PM
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Azmayesh thi joor ki
hausale daga de gaye

Nafrat ki zindagi me
Rang e hina de gaye

Tanha mujhe chodkar
jeene ki dua de gaye

Dil ka  marz  dekar
Dard e dawa de gaye

Bewafai ka chola pahan
wade wafa  de   gaye

Toofan me yun bithakar
sahil ka pata de gaye

wo subah ki baat karke
dard e nisha de gaye

jaam hontho se pilakar
botal ka nasha de gaye

laakhon ki bheed me wo
kadmon ke nishaan de gaye
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2013, 06:36:40 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 06:45:45 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 06:56:21 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on June 25, 2013, 06:11:10 PM
Azmayesh thi zor ki
hausale daga de gaye

Nafrat ki zindagi me
Rang e hina de gaye

Tanha mujhe chodkar
jeene ki dua de gaye

Dil ka  marz  dekar
Dard e dawa de gaye

Bewafai ka chola pahan
wada-e- wafa  de   gaye

Toofan me yun bithakar
sahil ka pata de gaye

wo subah ki baat karke
dard- e- nisha de gaye

jaam hontho se pilakar
botal ka nasha de gaye

laakhon ki bheed me wo
kadmon ke nishaan de gaye


good sir ,but nishaan is not the similar qafia as other qafia
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2013, 07:04:50 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 08:32:57 PM »
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bahut khoob premdeep sahab..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2013, 08:43:54 PM »
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badi achchi peshkash rahi premdeepji. likhte rahiye. dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2013, 09:40:44 PM »
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Beautiful...
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 11:30:47 PM »
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good
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 11:35:21 PM »
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Nice one  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2013, 11:38:41 PM »
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Nice1
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2013, 03:56:54 AM »
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Quote from: premdeep on June 25, 2013, 06:11:10 PM
Azmayesh thi joor ki
hausale daga de gaye

Nafrat ki zindagi me
Rang e hina de gaye

Tanha mujhe chodkar
jeene ki dua de gaye

Dil ka  marz  dekar
Dard e dawa de gaye

Bewafai ka chola pahan
wade wafa  de   gaye

Toofan me yun bithakar
sahil ka pata de gaye

wo subah ki baat karke
dard e nisha de gaye

jaam hontho se pilakar
botal ka nasha de gaye

laakhon ki bheed me wo
kadmon ke nishaan de gaye


wah wah wah....!
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2013, 06:35:18 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Premdeep ji.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2013, 07:18:46 PM »
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WaaH WaaH WaaH
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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2013, 03:50:04 PM »
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thanks to all..
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