Reh gayi main aur meri "yadein"

by nidhi_yadein on August 07, 2009, 06:13:12 PM
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"Mohabbat karne ki dil ne saja ye kaisi paayi hai,
    aaj fir main hun akeli aur saath meri tanhai hai,
    teri wafayein hi to thi meri muskurahaat har pal,
    chehak uthta tha munn tere aane ki har aahat par,
    kyun badal gaye tum?kaise tum bewafa ho gaye?Huh?
    meri mohabbat tumhaare jeene ka jariya thi agar,
    to aise kaise ek pal me tum mujhse muh mod gaye??
    bohat se sawal hain dil me,ankhe pathra gayi hain,
    aaj fir "nidhi" akeli hai,saath uski "yadein" reh gayi hain."
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2009, 06:21:06 PM »
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Wah bahut hi khoob NIDHI ji….



AAJ FIR YADOH NEY GHERA HAI
HAR TARAF TANHAYI KA FERA HAI
REHTEY THEY HOTOH PEH MUSKAAN BANKEY
AAJ FIR LABOH PEH KHAMOSHI KA PEHRA HAI

DIL LAGANEY KI SAJA TOH PAA LI HAI
CHAND KOH CHURANEY KI SAJA PA LI HAI
GAMOH SEY HI ABB TOH RISHTA MERA HAI
HAR TARAF TANHAYI KA FERA HAI
AAJ FIR YADOH NEY GHERA HAI



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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2009, 06:27:08 PM »
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thanx jasbir ji...and aapne bhi bohat khoob likha happy9.

Jab khwab sajaye hon zindagi bhar ke kisi ke saath,
aur beech raah me chhodh jaaye wo haath......
khamosh ho jaati hai ek pal me zindagi.......
ruk jaati hai dhadkan,par jeena padta hai fir bhi.
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2009, 06:33:35 PM »
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Thanks Nidhi Ji …
Wah bahut hi khoob NIDHI ji….


DHADKANOH MEH BASA KEY CHODD GAYA KOI
KISS GUM MEH DEKHO YAAROH CHODD GAYA KOI
KAISEY MAIN APNI JAAN DEH DU “JASBIR”
MARTEY MARTEY JEENA BHI TOH SIKHA GAYA KOI


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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2009, 06:40:57 PM »
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wow....especialy last line is awesome !!

Dard-e-bewafaai kuch aisa asar kar gaya mujhpe,
na reh gaya aetbaar mujhe ab in rishton pe,
thokar khayi hai mohabbat me kuch aise yaron,
aage badhne ki koi chahat na rahi ab dil me..
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2009, 06:41:37 PM »
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wow Good work Nidhi and Jas ji!!

Nice to see You back Nidhi...
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2009, 06:45:55 PM »
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thank u so much pooja ji.
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2009, 06:56:28 PM »
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Quote from: nidhi_yadein on August 07, 2009, 06:40:57 PM
wow....especialy last line is awesome !!

Dard-e-bewafaai kuch aisa asar kar gaya mujhpe,
na reh gaya aetbaar mujhe ab in rishton pe,
thokar khayi hai mohabbat me kuch aise yaron,
aage badhne ki koi chahat na rahi ab dil me..




THANKS NIDHI JI &
Kya baat hai ji… wah wah


BEWAFA SEY WAFA KI THI MAINEY
HAR KISI SEY SAJA LI THI MAINEY
TAKRA TOH HUM DUNIYA SEY BHI JATEY
JUST-OH-JU MEH TERI, KASAM LI THI MAINEY



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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2009, 06:56:49 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2009, 06:41:37 PM
wow Good work Nidhi and Jas ji!!

Nice to see You back Nidhi...


THANKS POOJA JI

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2009, 04:56:59 AM »
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Waah waaah nidhi and jasbir ji... Waah Kya kamal ki tukbandi ki hai... bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

Good work both !
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2009, 01:30:38 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 08, 2009, 04:56:59 AM
Waah waaah nidhi and jasbir ji... Waah Kya kamal ki tukbandi ki hai... bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

Good work both !

THANKS SOPHI JI.... aap bhi kuch keh jati toh iss mehfil ki shoba aur badd jati

jasbir singh
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«Reply #11 on: September 01, 2009, 10:41:19 AM »
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Quote from: nidhi_yadein on August 07, 2009, 06:13:12 PM
"Mohabbat karne ki dil ne saja ye kaisi paayi hai,
    aaj fir main hun akeli aur saath meri tanhai hai,
    teri wafayein hi to thi meri muskurahaat har pal,
    chehak uthta tha munn tere aane ki har aahat par,
    kyun badal gaye tum?kaise tum bewafa ho gaye?Huh?
    meri mohabbat tumhaare jeene ka jariya thi agar,
    to aise kaise ek pal me tum mujhse muh mod gaye??
    bohat se sawal hain dil me,ankhe pathra gayi hain,
    aaj fir "nidhi" akeli hai,saath uski "yadein" reh gayi hain."
bhut achche dost...bahut achcha likha hai
mehsoos kar raha hoon dard magar yahan kucch nahin kahoonga

dekhta hai dil mera, tu dard main doobi huyi
kya kahoon . kaise main teri aankhon k aansoo chheen loon

sochta hoon har pal main ab, kaise tujhe hansa sakoon
kaise mein tere dil k saare gham ko tujhse chheen loon

maine kaha ,tu ro na ab, main khushi le aaya hoon
woh boli kii main kamzarf nahn kii tera chen chheen loon
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«Reply #12 on: September 01, 2009, 11:07:54 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Nidhi ji,Jasbir ji,Saahil ji,mindblowing creation.excellent.
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 01, 2009, 11:07:54 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Nidhi ji,Jasbir ji,Saahil ji,mindblowing creation.excellent.
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thanks madhu ji

jasbir singh
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«Reply #14 on: March 22, 2010, 11:30:53 AM »
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Quote from: nidhi_yadein on August 07, 2009, 06:13:12 PM
"Mohabbat karne ki dil ne saja ye kaisi paayi hai,
    aaj fir main hun akeli aur saath meri tanhai hai,
    teri wafayein hi to thi meri muskurahaat har pal,
    chehak uthta tha munn tere aane ki har aahat par,
    kyun badal gaye tum?kaise tum bewafa ho gaye?Huh?
    meri mohabbat tumhaare jeene ka jariya thi agar,
    to aise kaise ek pal me tum mujhse muh mod gaye??
    bohat se sawal hain dil me,ankhe pathra gayi hain,
    aaj fir "nidhi" akeli hai,saath uski "yadein" reh gayi hain."
Wah wah wah Nidhi Ji. Aap bahut achchha likhti haiN. Isi tarah likhte rahiye aur hum sabhi se share karte rahiye.
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