Saans baki hai!

by salma786 on February 13, 2009, 03:04:13 PM
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Ek Ashiyaan banaya tha dil ke armano se,
Un armaano ki asthiya tu bahakar chaldiya,
Mana to tha tujhe apna hum sathi,
Tu khoon ke ansu rula k chaldiya!

Jo zakhmo ka hisaab me karne baithi,
Akhoon ke aage mere andhera sa chagaya,
Mai marhaam lagane hi baithi thi,
Jo phir se tu unhe taza karne agaya!

Ab meri zindegi me ae-bewafa,
Tere diye daag hi baki hai,
Thehar ja tu or kar sitam k,
Ab bhi mere andar saans baki hai!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2009, 03:07:31 PM »
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Hmm, Nice One Salma Ji,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2009, 04:17:41 PM »
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bahot bahot khubsurat yaar! ek ek line touched my heart, and flows very nicely!!!! yunheen lihtay rahaen...
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2009, 04:59:49 PM »
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bahoot khoob salma....
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2009, 05:05:34 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 13, 2009, 03:04:13 PM
Ek Ashiyaan banaya tha dil ke armano se,
Un armaano ki asthiya tu bahakar chaldiya,
Mana to tha tujhe apna hum sathi,
Tu khoon ke ansu rula k chaldiya!

Jo zakhmo ka hisaab me karne baithi,
Akhoon ke aage mere andhera sa chagaya,
Mai marhaam lagane hi baithi thi,
Jo phir se tu unhe taza karne agaya!

Ab meri zindegi me ae-bewafa,
Tere diye daag hi baki hai,
Thehar ja tu or kar sitam k,
Ab bhi mere andar saans baki hai!!

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wah wah Salma, bahut khoob

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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2009, 09:14:30 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Salma Ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2009, 03:44:00 AM »
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Shukriya janasheen ji!
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2009, 03:45:08 AM »
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Shukriya anjaan ji!
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2009, 03:46:14 AM »
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Thanks pooja ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 14, 2009, 03:47:14 AM »
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Shukriya jasbir ji!
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«Reply #10 on: February 14, 2009, 03:50:39 AM »
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Shukriya harish ji !
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«Reply #11 on: February 14, 2009, 07:46:03 AM »
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bahut khoob salma ji.... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: February 14, 2009, 07:56:37 AM »
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Ikhtiyar de muje apni chend saso pe
Pal bhar me tujhe sadiyo ki mohabbat dooga

Kisi ne jaana hi kaha hain ab tak GHAYEL ko
Apni mohabbat se teri asthiyo me aag laga dooga

                            -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #13 on: February 14, 2009, 08:05:48 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 14, 2009, 07:56:37 AM
Ikhtiyar de muje apni chend saso pe
Pal bhar me tujhe sadiyo ki mohabbat dooga

Kisi ne jaana hi kaha hain ab tak GHAYEL ko
Apni mohabbat se teri asthiyo me aag laga dooga

                            -Sajid Ghayel-

Bahut achha...

Meri mohabbat ki tapish ko shayad tune samjha nahi,
ek chingari se tera daaman jal na jaaye kahin....
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«Reply #14 on: February 14, 2009, 08:29:11 AM »
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Dil jala ho jiska use daman ki parwa kya
Nasamajh yeh bata tune GHAYEL ko samjha kya

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