Saath hai un key, kisee gair jism ki khushboo!

by abdbundeli on August 05, 2008, 09:34:54 PM
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Ham wahaan rahtey naheen, tum jahaan naheen rahtey!
 Log kahtey hain yahee ham sey: ham naheen kahtey!!
 
 Nigaah un kee idhar thee, to fir, udhar kyaa thaa?
 Woh samajhtey hain: ujaaloun mein ham naheen rahtey!

 Saath hai un key, kisee gair jism ki khushboo;
 Woh samajhtey hain, hawaaoun mein ham naheen bahtey!

                                     - abd bundeli
  
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2008, 03:39:24 PM »
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Bahut khoob ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2009, 12:15:31 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 07, 2008, 03:39:24 PM
Bahut khoob ji
Thanks Roja!
       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2009, 12:17:32 PM »
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SACH MEH BAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT KHAYAAL HAI BUNDELI JI... WA WAH WAHHH


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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2009, 12:54:12 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 08, 2009, 12:17:32 PM
SACH MEH BAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT KHAYAAL HAI BUNDELI JI... WA WAH WAHHH


JASBIR SINGH
Thanks a lot, JASBIR SINGH ji!
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 05:23:24 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 08, 2009, 12:15:31 PM
Thanks Roja!
       - abd bundeli

You are most welcome uncle ji

Aa gayi raas jisko kaid-e-kafas (pinjre ka bandan)
Umer ber na fadfada paye hum
Waqt dunia se naata toot gaya
Aasta.n jab se tera apnaye hum
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 05:33:57 PM »
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Very beautifully written, Abd Ji! Bahut khoob! Applause


Very nice lines, Roja Ji! Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2009, 04:43:43 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 16, 2009, 05:23:24 PM
You are most welcome uncle ji

Aa gayi raas jisko kaid-e-kafas (pinjre ka bandan)
Umer ber na fadfada paye hum
Waqt dunia se naata toot gaya
Aasta.n jab se tera apnaye hum


I'm obliged, Roja!

Aastaan eik, raah-e-talab eik, eik sanam;
Lag rahaa hai, ki, sahee morh par rukey hain qadam!
Yuun to, is raah mein ham ko miley they morh itney,
Ki, lag rahaa thaa, silsilah kabhee na hogaa khatam!!

                          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2009, 04:51:10 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on August 16, 2009, 05:33:57 PM
Very beautifully written, Abd Ji! Bahut khoob! Applause

Very nice lines, Roja Ji! Applause
Thanks Deepati!
           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2009, 10:14:19 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 16, 2009, 05:23:24 PM
You are most welcome uncle ji

Aa gayi raas jisko kaid-e-kafas (pinjre ka bandan)
Umer ber na fadfada paye hum
Waqt dunia se naata toot gaya
Aasta.n jab se tera apnaye hum




wah roja ji

jasbir singh
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2009, 10:14:55 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 17, 2009, 04:43:43 AM
I'm obliged, Roja!

Aastaan eik, raah-e-talab eik, eik sanam;
Lag rahaa hai, ki, sahee morh par rukey hain qadam!
Yuun to, is raah mein ham ko miley they morh itney,
Ki, lag rahaa thaa, silsilah kabhee na hogaa khatam!!

                          - abd bundeli


very nice bundeli ji

jasbir singh
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2009, 12:45:27 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 17, 2009, 10:14:55 AM

very nice bundeli ji

jasbir singh

Thanks jasbir singh ji!
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2009, 03:10:54 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 17, 2009, 04:43:43 AM
I'm obliged, Roja!

Aastaan eik, raah-e-talab eik, eik sanam;
Lag rahaa hai, ki, sahee morh par rukey hain qadam!
Yuun to, is raah mein ham ko miley they morh itney,
Ki, lag rahaa thaa, silsilah kabhee na hogaa khatam!!

                          - abd bundeli

Wah wah... Clapping Smiley

Zindagi ko saware hai meri tapasya
Raz ye baadalon ne samjaya

Kaid-e-waqton-makaa.n se hai azaad
Jisne doonda,"Roja", usse paaya
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2009, 03:12:22 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on August 16, 2009, 05:33:57 PM
Very beautifully written, Abd Ji! Bahut khoob! Applause


Very nice lines, Roja Ji! Applause

Thanks dear Deepati  Usual Smile

Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 17, 2009, 10:14:19 AM
wah roja ji

jasbir singh

Thanks Jas ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: August 17, 2009, 04:29:22 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 17, 2009, 03:10:54 PM
Wah wah... Clapping Smiley


Zindagi ko saware hai meri tapasya
Raz ye baadalon ne samjaya

Kaid-e-waqton-makaa.n se hai azaad
Jisne doonda,"Roja", usse paaya

Wah Roja Waaah!
     - abd bundeli
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