"Sanam, Tune bhi Dard Diya BEWAFA Se Pehle..." -GUMboy...

by GUMboy on July 12, 2011, 02:02:50 PM
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Meri Kya Khata Thi Iss Khata Se Pehle,
"Sanam, Tune bhi Dard Diye BEWAFA Se Pehle..."

Har Din Hoti Thi Mulaqat Apni,
Aaj Din bhi Khatam Huaa Raat Hone Se Pehle...

Rehmat Khuda Ne Kabhi bakshi Hi Nahi,
Dua Bhi Be-asar Huii,Asar Hone Se Pehle...

Lamha-lamha Wo Door hoti rahi,
Dooriya Ho gayi Darmiyaan,Milne Se Pehle...

Kyun Saath Chhod diya Tune Mera,
Saath bhi Chhut Gaya Dil Tutne Se Pehle...

Kuch Kahu to Dil Bhar Aata Hai,
Dekho yaaro, Aansu bhi Aa gaye Rone Se Pehle...

Ye GUMboy to Khushiya Aur GUM Me Farq  Jaanta Hi Nahi,
Kyonki, GUM Mill Gaya Khushiya Milne Se Pehle...

Meri Kya Khata Thi Iss Khata Se Pehle,
"Sanam, Tune bhi Dard Diye BEWAFA Se Pehle..."

Aur Do lines pesh karta hu F.H.SIDDIQUI Saab ke Sahaare,

Tishnagi Me Tumhare,Maikhane Hum Chal diye,
Bazn-e-rindaan Rang Laayi, Pyaala-E-Meena Uthaane Se Pehle...

(Bazn-e-rindaan- Sharabiyon ki mehfil)

-GUMboy...
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2011, 04:18:55 PM »
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bahoot khoob gumboy zi
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2011, 04:42:11 PM »
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kya baat hai kamaaal kar diya Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2011, 04:45:50 PM »
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boht khoob gm ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2011, 05:41:24 PM »
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Quote from: Manish Kumar Khedawat on July 12, 2011, 04:18:55 PM
bahoot khoob gumboy zi
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Shukriya manishji..
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2011, 05:44:07 PM »
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Quote from: kamal aggarwal on July 12, 2011, 04:42:11 PM
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e]Bahut bahut shukriya kamal ji.. Aise hi nazar banaye rahiye..
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2011, 05:50:31 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on July 12, 2011, 04:45:50 PM
boht khoob gm ji
Shukriya saahill ji.. Hausla afzahi ke liye shukriya.. Khush rahiye..
-GUMboy...
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2011, 06:25:00 PM »
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Bahut dard bhari aur khoobsurat peshkash Gumboy ji.superb. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2011, 06:31:37 PM »
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dilse shukriya madhuwesh ji.. Achha likhne ki koshish kar raha hu.. Aise hi sath dete rahiye..
-GUMboy...
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2011, 09:31:22 AM »
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Gumboy ji,achhi peshkash hai.Shukriya ki aap ne ,alfaaz ka matlab bataaye jaane ke baad ,mere diye huve kuchh alfaaz se bhi she'r kehne ki koshish ki.Mera mashwira hai ki web per post kerne se pehle eik baar apni poem ko ,bulki jo kuchh bhi aap post karein,phir se nazar daal liya kijiye taaki aur nikhaar aaye aur ghalti ke chances kum ho.n...Aur, baraai meherbaani mujhe acknowledge kar ke embarrass na karein.Mai.n bhi aap hi ki tarah eik learner hoo.n.Aap ke PM ke liye shukriya.Hasan 
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2011, 09:37:21 AM »
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Bhuat Bhuat...........Khoob GB Bhuat Khoob
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«Reply #11 on: July 13, 2011, 09:42:55 AM »
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Dilse shukriya hasan ji.. Aap ne kahi hui bat amal karne ki koshish karunga.. Aur ha mujhe sahi laga issliye embrass hone wali baat nahi hai.. Hum sab learner hai par jo particular learn kisiko karta hai to bhulna nahi chahiye na.. Shukriya ada karne ke bhi bahut tarike hote usme se ek tha.. Aap hame aise hi aage sahayata karte rahiye yahi khwaish..
-GUMboy...
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2011, 09:46:36 AM »
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Hausla afzahi ke liye Shukriya kash ji..
Apna Khayal rakhiye,..
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«Reply #13 on: July 13, 2011, 10:00:27 AM »
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Kyoo..n Bhai Mujhe Kaya Huai Hai .........
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«Reply #14 on: July 13, 2011, 10:08:03 AM »
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Quote from: GUMboy on July 12, 2011, 02:02:50 PM
Meri Kya Khata Thi Iss Khata Se Pehle,
"Sanam, Tune bhi Dard Diye BEWAFA Se Pehle..."

Har Din Hoti Thi Mulaqat Apni,
Aaj Din bhi Khatam Huaa Raat Hone Se Pehle...

Rehmat Khuda Ne Kabhi bakshi Hi Nahi,
Dua Bhi Be-asar Huii,Asar Hone Se Pehle...

Lamha-lamha Wo Door hoti rahi,
Dooriya Ho gayi Darmiyaan,Milne Se Pehle...

Kyun Saath Chhod diya Tune Mera,
Saath bhi Chhut Gaya Dil Tutne Se Pehle...

Kuch Kahu to Dil Bhar Aata Hai,
Dekho yaaro, Aansu bhi Aa gaye Rone Se Pehle...

Ye GUMboy to Khushiya Aur GUM Me Farq  Jaanta Hi Nahi,
Kyonki, GUM Mill Gaya Khushiya Milne Se Pehle...

Meri Kya Khata Thi Iss Khata Se Pehle,
"Sanam, Tune bhi Dard Diye BEWAFA Se Pehle..."

Aur Do lines pesh karta hu F.H.SIDDIQUI Saab ke Sahaare,

Tishnagi Me Tumhare,Maikhane Hum Chal diye,
Bazn-e-rindaan Rang Laayi, Pyaala-E-Meena Uthaane Se Pehle...

(Bazn-e-rindaan- Sharabiyon ki mehfil)

-GUMboy...


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