"" so Raha hun Mai ""

by nirala on January 18, 2011, 08:42:37 AM
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so raha hun mai, na jagaa mujhe

ho sake to bas thodi aur, de daga mujhe

nafrat karnewale mujhse, iltaza bhi meri sunn ja

intehaa kar de nafrat ki
warna thodi si aur khud me, de jagah mujhe

so raha hun mai, na jaga mujhe
kho raha hun mai jhilmilate khabon ki mehfil me, na sataa mujhe

tapp rha hun mai ruuh ki, garmi se, na sahla mujhe

jalega zism tera bhi, chhod akela mujhe

so raha hun mai, na jagunga ab
kareeb aa, dekh mujhe aakhri baar, laash samajh

ho sake to ab KAFAN udha mujhe
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manjum
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2011, 08:50:43 AM »
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wah mukarra hai niralaji.... ye nirala... kahan chhupa tha abhi tak..

kya baat kahi hai... ek dam dil tak.... bahut gahare.

wah
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2011, 08:53:40 AM »
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Manju --- ham nirale hain kuch bhi likh jaate hain utpatang sa.
aapko pasand aya ye aapki meherbaani hai bas.
warna mai kis khet ka muli bhala--
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sarahne ke liye
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thanx
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manjum
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2011, 09:02:55 AM »
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are sach main bahut badiya hai... niralaji... khub hai... dard ka ahsas dil ko chhuta hai...
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2011, 09:09:24 AM »
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aree wah.
fir to ek baar aur thanx
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thanx
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2011, 10:38:35 AM »
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tap raha hu me ruh ki garmi se..............

ufffffffffffffff...............nirala ji i think it is best of ur poetry .........bahot sundar lkiha he dear......thx for sharing such a lovely and meaningful post....
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2011, 10:57:55 AM »
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Sote Nirala ko yu aawaaj de kar mat jagaao re tum
Usski nirali harkaton se phir so nahi paaoge tum
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2011, 12:33:45 PM »
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bht khoob nirala ji.....
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nirala
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2011, 04:09:03 PM »
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Matrix ji --aapke aaj ka post dekh ke hi maine ek choti si kosis ki bas.
difference sirf itna aya ki Aap bik rahe hain aur mai So raha hun..Usual Smile
btw aapka sukriya aapne pasand kiya.
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thanx
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nirala
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2011, 04:10:39 PM »
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Koyal sahiba aapne sahi kaha mujhe mat jagao warna tum so nahi paoge Usual Smile
badhiya khayal.
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thanx
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2011, 04:12:01 PM »
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manzil ji apka bhi sukriya sarahne ke liye
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thanx
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2011, 05:48:14 PM »
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Nice
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nirala
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2011, 03:02:39 PM »
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Rishi ji---
hausla badhane ke liye dher sara Dhanyabaad
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thanx
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