ta-le pairon ke zamee rahne do,,,,,,sunil

by sunildehgawani on January 28, 2013, 01:57:41 PM
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               fasle kaayam rakho abhi,
                     has raten hothon pe saji rahne do.
               yeh kami hi sahi faraaz,
                     magar zindagi mein bani rahne do.
               jal ke patan ge ne chukai hai,
                     keemat   dil   lagane  ki.  
               khush ki achhi nahi  itni,
                     nami ankhoon mein bani rahne do.
               fasana fasana hi rakhna ,
                     mera   woh   jeehad e   khuloos.
               chin gariyan dur talak jayengi,
                     raakh mein  aag  dabi  rahne do.
               daur-e-muflishi mein kahan,
                     martwa-rishton ki baat karte ho.
               hadon ke dai-re mein raho,
                     ta-le  pairon  ke jami rahne do.      
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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2013, 01:58:20 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 28, 2013, 03:55:08 PM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on January 28, 2013, 01:57:41 PM
               fasle kaayam rakho abhi,
                     has raten hothon pe saji rahne do.
               yeh kami hi sahi faraaz,
                     magar zindagi mein bani rahne do.
               jal ke patan ge ne chukai hai,
                     keemat   dil   lagane  ki. 
               khush ki achhi nahi  itni,
                     nami ankhoon mein bani rahne do.
               fasana fasana hi rakhna ,
                     mera   woh   jeehad e   khuloos.
               chin gariyan dur talak jayengi,
                     raakh mein  aag  dabi  rahne do.
               daur-e-muflishi mein kahan,
                     martwa-rishton ki baat karte ho.
               hadon ke dai-re mein raho,
                     ta-le  pairon  ke jami rahne do.     

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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2013, 04:07:19 AM »
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waah waah nicely composed
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 05:25:05 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2013, 05:51:02 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2013, 07:05:06 AM »
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बहुत खूब सुनील जी ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2013, 09:23:00 AM »
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Sunil Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab badi hi umdaa aur khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... aik khoobsurat aur dilkash kalaam
par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


HaaN aik baat samjh meiN nahi aayi humare ke aap "Faraaz" sahaab
ka taqallus kyuN istemaal kar gaye.. ?

Khair is khoob kalaam par aikbar phir se dili mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2013, 12:47:45 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 29, 2013, 09:23:00 AM
Sunil Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab badi hi umdaa aur khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... aik khoobsurat aur dilkash kalaam
par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


HaaN aik baat samjh meiN nahi aayi humare ke aap "Faraaz" sahaab
ka taqallus kyuN istemaal kar gaye.. ?

Khair is khoob kalaam par aikbar phir se dili mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

,,,parwaj sahab aapka kalam par ..gaur farmne aur ,,,hauslon ke liye tahe dil shukriya ,,,ek shayari main humne ,,,fraaz naam padha thha ,tum mere tallukon ka kahin jikar na karna faraaz main logon se kah dunga unhe fursat nahi milti ,,,lakin pata nahi thaa ,faraz sahab ek ..jane-mane fankar hain,aur yeh sher unhi ka hai ,isliye bhul main,,, fraaz ,,shabd ka istemal hum bhi kar gaye ,,kalam apni hi hai ,,,shukriya ,,khuda hafiz
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2013, 12:48:53 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on January 28, 2013, 01:58:20 PM
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suman ji aapka shukriya ,,kalam ko pahila hausla farmane k liye
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2013, 12:51:22 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on January 28, 2013, 03:55:08 PM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah khobsurat sharing Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

baichen sahab ,,,apka bahut bahut shukriya ,,,yun hi sath dete rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2013, 12:53:28 PM »
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saini sahab ,,apka bahut bahut shukriya ,,aap yun hi sath dete rahiye
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«Reply #12 on: January 29, 2013, 12:55:26 PM »
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  Thankyou ! nand bahu ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 29, 2013, 12:56:19 PM »
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Quote from: prashad on January 29, 2013, 05:51:02 AM
bahut khoob
thnks ,,,prashad ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 29, 2013, 12:58:12 PM »
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Thankyou ! amit prakash ji ..yun hi hausle badhate rahiye
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