******** TANHAI *********

by sonubansal on June 02, 2005, 08:14:09 AM
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Jab nahi nibhana sath to umeedein jagate kyun ho ,
Agar aate ho to chod kar jaate kyu ho.
Ham to tanha hi jee lete ‘gar tum na aate,
Hamari tanhai bhi ham se cheen kar lejate kyu ho.”
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kruti
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2005, 11:54:15 PM »
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Bahut Khub likha hai aapne Sonuji.

  Khata ki hamne jo sath manga aapse
  Khata Ki hamne jo sab kuch lutana chaha aap pe,
  Khata ki jo Kuch pana chaha aapse
  Bhul Gaye the hum hamne sauda nahi Pyar Kiya   tha aapse
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kruti
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2005, 11:57:27 PM »
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Bahut Khub likha hai aapne Sonuji.

Khata ki hamne jo sath manga aapse
Khata Ki hamne jo sab kuch lutana chaha aap pe,
Khata ki jo Kuch pana chaha aapse
Bhul Gaye the hum hamne sauda nahi Pyar Kiya tha aapse
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ashishjethwa8717
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2005, 04:49:53 AM »
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hi kruti nice work,

this is for u

"ghum unko bhi naseeb hotay hain
jo log khushnaseeb hotay hain
hota hai dunya main koi aik hi apna
warna saray dusray raqeeb hotay hain"

"khabhi soocha hai tu nay dil kia kheta hai?
khabhi socha hai kia hota jab dil tot ta hai?
kitna dard hota hai ...
jab aapnoo say khauff hota hai ...
woh manzar bhi kia manzar hota hai ..
jab tu kareeb rehkar bhi door hota hai ...
kitna kamzrro vo shaks hota hai ...
jo dost he ko dhoka deta hai ...
itna bandnaseeb woh q hota hai ...
jo majmay main bhi aakela hota hai...
judaee ka ghum bhi kia ghum hota hai...
kyioun her koi mujh say sawal karta hai
kyioun mera dil her bar roo deta hai ..
abb tu sayia bhi yia he sawal karta hai...
kisay jo itna khush rehta hai...Huh?Huh?"

bye reply me
ashish
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sonubansal
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2005, 05:37:01 AM »
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Thanks kruti ji aapne bhi bahut acha likha.
Ashish ji aapne bhi such me mind blowing ikha hai
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kruti
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2005, 09:20:09 AM »
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Hum Teri Chahat Mein is Dil ko kho bethe,
Zinda To hai par ye Zindagi Kho bethe,
Jine ka har maksad aur matlab kho bethe,
Pehchan the aap hamari,Aur aap hi ko kho bethe?
Ab to sirf Intazar hai aapka is Dil ko,
Par aap ko pane ki Har ummed hai kho bethe.
Hum Teri Chahat Mein is Dil ko kho bethe
Na hi apane aap ko aur kya kys kho bethe,
Kuch bhi nahi hai hum aaj,
Hum Apana sab kuch hai kho bethe.
Hum Teri Chahat Mein is Dil ko kho bethe.
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kruti
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2005, 09:26:44 AM »
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Koi Dil par dastak dekar yun chala gaya,
Sathi koi bhula hua yaad Aa gaya
Saye huye Aarmanon ko Phir Jaga diya,
Viran thi zindagi Raneen Bana diya.
Thnx Wth Regrdz.
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sonubansal
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2005, 11:52:18 AM »
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Quote from: "kruti"
Koi Dil par dastak dekar yun chala gaya,
Sathi koi bhula hua yaad Aa gaya
Saye huye Aarmanon ko Phir Jaga diya,
Viran thi zindagi Raneen Bana diya.
Thnx Wth Regrdz.
WAH WAH kruti ji, aapne to hila ke rakh diya. Really good !!!

Jaane mat dena uss aane wale ko
Viraan jindagi ko phir se  khush-haal bana lena
Phir se sone mat dena inn armano ko
Inn yadoon ka ek gulistaan bana lena,
mat murjhayen phir se in bagon ke phul,
baharon ko apne sine me chupa lena.
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kruti
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2005, 04:01:21 PM »
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Quote from: "sonubansal"
Quote from: "kruti"
Koi Dil par dastak dekar yun chala gaya,
Sathi koi bhula hua yaad Aa gaya
Saye huye Aarmanon ko Phir Jaga diya,
Viran thi zindagi Raneen Bana diya.
Thnx Wth Regrdz.
WAH WAH kruti ji, aapne to hila ke rakh diya. Really good !!!

Jaane mat dena uss aane wale ko
Viraan jindagi ko phir se  khush-haal bana lena
Phir se sone mat dena inn armano ko
Inn yadoon ka ek gulistaan bana lena,
mat murjhayen phir se in bagon ke phul,
baharon ko apne sine me chupa lena.


Thanx 4 ur compliments.
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