TERA WADA ............................(Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on January 03, 2009, 04:20:38 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 19, 2009, 06:47:00 PM »
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shukaria DH ji!!!
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«Reply #16 on: January 19, 2009, 06:48:19 PM »
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teri ankhon main chupe hue ansuon ko dekha hai,
shayad humne kisi dildar ke liye chupe intezar ko dekha hai,
mit gaya tere dil se woh jo tera dilbar tha kabhi,
shayad humne teri ankhon main daabi kisi ki bewaffai ko dekha hai...
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«Reply #17 on: January 20, 2009, 09:46:36 AM »
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bahoot he achi lagi apki yah rachna Jas ji!! bahoot acha likha hai!!

waadon per unke ek zindagi beetai thi
Umeendo per dil ki nagri sajai thi

toot.ta dil bhi deta raha gawahi uski
jiski tasveer kabhi dil main sajai thi

Ajj samjh ayya her toote waadein per kyun roya dil
uski her bewafai ne, meri rihaai ki raah dikhai thi....


hum.. kuch ajeeb sa he kalam likh gai...hope app sab ko samjh aa jaaye jis arth main likha hai

Waah Didijaan,.
Bohat Hi Achche Nice One,.
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«Reply #18 on: January 20, 2009, 09:57:04 AM »
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JASBIRJI kya khoob lika hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Rashme vaade pyaar wafa sab jhoothe hain....
IN VAADO KA KYA....NM

SHAYAD KISI FILMY GANE KI LINE HAIN...
BUS YUHI YAAD AA GAYI...

Hanji SMARDIA.... bahut hi pyara sa yeh gana hai

KASMEY WADEY PYAR WAFA, SAB BATEY HAI BATOH KA KYA
KOI KISI NA NAHI YEH JHUTEY NATEY HAI, NATOH KA KYA

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«Reply #19 on: January 20, 2009, 10:01:08 AM »
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bahoot he achi lagi apki yah rachna Jas ji!! bahoot acha likha hai!!

waadon per unke ek zindagi beetai thi
Umeendo per dil ki nagri sajai thi

toot.ta dil bhi deta raha gawahi uski
jiski tasveer kabhi dil main sajai thi

Ajj samjh ayya her toote waadein per kyun roya dil
uski her bewafai ne, meri rihaai ki raah dikhai thi....


hum.. kuch ajeeb sa he kalam likh gai...hope app sab ko samjh aa jaaye jis arth main likha hai

hanji Pooja JI, bahut pyara likha hai aap neh aur bahut saaf saaf likha hai aap ney, bilkul samaj aagaya hai JI hamey....

UNKEY WADEY YU DARD SEY RISHTA JODD GAYE
HUM SHEHAR MEH REHNEY WALOH KOH,
VIRAAN BASTI MEH CHODD GAYE


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #20 on: January 20, 2009, 10:02:31 AM »
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teri ankhon main chupe hue ansuon ko dekha hai,
shayad humne kisi dildar ke liye chupe intezar ko dekha hai,
mit gaya tere dil se woh jo tera dilbar tha kabhi,
shayad humne teri ankhon main daabi kisi ki bewaffai ko dekha hai...

WAH DH, wah bahut khoob

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #21 on: January 20, 2009, 04:12:24 PM »
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bohot khub likha he
thanks tumne mujhe samjha
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«Reply #22 on: January 20, 2009, 05:28:28 PM »
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shukriya Jasbir jee...Apne bhi bahaut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #23 on: January 26, 2009, 07:44:42 PM »
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shukriya Jasbir jee...Apne bhi bahaut acha likha hai...

Thanks DH

Jasbir Singh
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